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Whispers In the Night

Cold and lonely comes twilight, to creep among the eves. To brush against the window panes, rustle amongst the leaves. Hush now, hear the calling, of voices on the wind. They speak to you only, of death, they do portend. So sleep not on this moon. Keep vigil within the light. Hold thy candle true against, the whispers in the night. For the contest: Two Thru Twelve Sponsored by Brian Strand Placement: 2nd

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Date: 6/30/2011 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations Paula for your win in the contest of Brian Strand "Two Thru Twelve". Love, Carol P. S. I was away and missed congrats on many of Brian's contests. I try but don't know if I will ever catch up.
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Date: 6/27/2011 6:31:00 PM
this one is very atmospheric, Paula. I just love it. Congrats, belatedly , on this one.
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Date: 6/20/2011 9:31:00 PM
Congrats Paula on another top ten win in Brian's contest with this wonderful write my friend.. a lovely piece of poetry my friend..luv..
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Date: 6/19/2011 11:22:00 PM
Very nice Paula. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/18/2011 8:49:00 PM
wonderful words so intriguing Paula.. felt mesmerized and immersed in the flow of the grandeur luv..good luck in the contest...
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:16:00 PM
I enjoyed this dreamy write, Paula
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:06:00 PM
Well done, Paula. Impeccable rhyming, as ever. I liiiike - very, very much. Good luck in Brian's contest with this smooth piece. :))
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