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Written: October 06, 2023 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ While the globe in the morning awakes The first light of day, a gentle break, Illuminating the earth's vast expanse, Unveiling nature's first enchanting dance. The first gleam of fall leaves, a staggering sight Painting the landscape with colors bright, A symphony of reds, oranges, and golds, A tapestry of beauty that never grows old. On tea, aged texts, and candles, wake at a touch, A sensory embrace that means so much. The aroma of steeped leaves, rich and warm, Whispering secrets of comfort and charm. Era books beckon with their weathered spines, Inviting us into tales of different times. Their worn pages hold stories untold, Waiting to be discovered, to unfold. Candles flicker, casting a soft glow, Creating a sanctuary, a haven below. Their dancing flames illuminate the room, Creating an atmosphere of warmth and gloom. In this dawn, a tale is woven, Of cozy moments, sweetly chosen. Whispers in the air, akin to a gentle breeze, Carrying the essence of tranquility and ease. As the day begins and the world stirs, We embrace the beauty that nature confers. With every sip of tea, every page we turn, We find solace in the lessons we learn.

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/11/2023 5:58:00 AM

We find solace in the lessons we learn- so much wisdom and philosophical depth in this write.. Your words have painted an eloquent tapestry of emotions where the atoms of serenity oscillate in the most perfect rhythm of your resplendent rhymes and mellifluous tones.. "In this dawn, a tale is woven" How enchanting is that! The phraseology here really provides a tranquil and cathartic experience for the reader.. Your wordplay is truly brilliant, as always.. Absolutely enjoyed reading this poem.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/8/2023 4:46:00 AM

I found this poem just breathtaking! The imagery you created along with your word choice impressed me. Your poem spoke to me on a soul level. You have such a beautiful way with words--a way that speaks to the brilliant and creative mind I believe you have. This is a fav for me. It took my breath away. I paused when reading each verse. Beautifully done! enjoy your Sunday, Sara PS I like hearing your poem read. I appreciate the extra effort.

Charles Messina

Date: 10/8/2023 2:31:00 AM

A brilliant write, Lasaad. The flow of this masterful poem brushes smoothly, my friend. Lovely in every aspect, my friend. Well done! ~Charlie

Silent One

Date: 10/7/2023 7:37:00 AM

Another beautiful poem from your pen.. you weave your words with so much ease and are so prolific in your poetry... the message in your poem is very important as highlighted in your last stanza...

Ink Empress

Date: 10/7/2023 7:18:00 AM

This poem shows so much of autumn and the colors and how warm it could be, when one is open and willing to spread light. So much depth in every line and the rhymes are brilliant and so is the imagery flowing so beautifully! I love the sight of candles flickering casting a soft glow, and how in the break of dawn a tale is woven, for us all to see and read and appreciate, we do find solace in lessons we learn and one must always learn to be true to those lessons and their selves. Pleasure reading

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/7/2023 5:14:00 AM

While the globe in the morning awakes The first light of day, a gentle break, Illuminating the earth's vast expanse---a beautiful beginning to a beautiful poem, my friend. Much enjoyed the images of dawn you convey.

Valsa George

Date: 10/6/2023 10:37:00 PM

In the lovely twilight hours of dawn in autumn with the landscape painted in colors bright, to sit near a flickering candle and reading the pages of a book is an exciting experience! The atmosphere you have created is so soothing and inviting ! Again and again you stand on the podium flashing your flag of victory and affirming your position as an unchallenged poet, dear Lasaad.

Karen Jones

Date: 10/6/2023 3:31:00 PM

This is warm and comforting. I could enjoy a cup of hot coffee cocoa or tea and read this over and over. Sotto Poet you are gifted and your poetry is uniquely inviting.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/6/2023 2:55:00 PM

i'm seeing many lovely autumnal poems, and this is one of them; i know it's about dawn really but it has an autumn feel..thanks for my placement and your comment on my poem, glad you enjoyed it :)