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Whispers of Eternity

..And you say we're the radicals This world is filled with answers Open up your eyes Throw all your manmade lies I need no man to bring out the best in me My life is on the run like a whisper from eternity I don't live by your rules of the hand and mind And I see the tide of the change You made us to believe That there is no hope I'm not another victim to believe There is still time to heed Your'e so damn predictable In everything that you do And I see the tide of the change I'm still here waiting for you for you, and I wait so long for you, for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/6/2020 11:26:00 AM
Ooh!!!, "Throw all your man made lies I need no man to bring out the best in me My life is on the run like a whisper from eternity I don't live by your rules Preach it, Sister of the hand and mind" being a man I'm not ashamed to agree with this passage. So true, so true, true that. There's praise in words and word in praise-Write On James ( Preach it, Sister )
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Michelle Barulich
Date: 1/10/2020 1:57:00 AM
Thank you James I appreciate all the feed back you did make me laugh from your lively comments :) I have a tune for this one it is a song I wrote awhile back. Thanks again.

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