Whispers

"Look there's a pissbum"
She whispers to me as I'm walking down the street
Someone is walking their Jack Russell
"There's a cute hogger"

Our private language runs through my veins
I now see the world through her eyes

I pass a yellow and green house
A happenstance reminder of her favorite team's colors
A ready, constant smile
I see the world through green-colored glasses
Ha! Her green eyes

"It runs every thirty minutes"
Her brain can wrap around a bus schedule
Where am I going?
She always knows

"Let's cross the street now"
She always had change for inexpensive pop machines
They're a find where ever they be
Always Diet Pepsi

We scoped out a backyard
Where she raised her kids
"I used to go out for coffee once a day,
 it was my only escape"

She's usually with me
When I'm roaming around
Slipping away
When I'm home alone

"Honey, there's a blue moon"
I remember skygazing when the nights were cold
Days when the world was an infinite space 
I hope the whispers never leave

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/10/2017 4:51:00 PM
Thanks Jesse!
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Date: 4/10/2017 4:48:00 PM
Thank you Doug!
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Date: 4/5/2017 7:04:00 AM
A good poem. I especially loved the bit about the pop machine... they're so hard to find a cheap one these days. I go to hotels and such... $2 a bottle!!! I remember finding machines when I was a kid some 20+ years ago... and getting pop for 25-50 cents. Thanks for sharing this.
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Date: 4/4/2017 6:09:00 PM
Love it, John. This is good stuff.
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