Whisper's

WHISPER’S

April rain fell like whispers on grass,
Soft and light like a half felt apology.
Dark clouds wafted overhead in shamed silence.
Distressed by a cold winter’s return. 
Daffodils wept and bowed in fading despair,
My Father’s favourite plant was slipping away. 
As my Father had done and now my Mother too
Lost to a world of cold whispers and sorrow. 

Dead flowers I had placed on their grave so light
Were fading like a memory, a star un-bright.

Still the rain whispered but failed to cleanse,
The grit of sorrow that inhabits my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Duncan Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 9:53 PM
Awesome write, I love it when I can feel the emotions coming from the words :) congrats on your placement :)
Merryman Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:59 PM
So sad, yet beautiful imagery! Congrats!
De Burca Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Thank you for reading and comment.
Kimathi Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 4:10 AM
I love the imagery of your work... Congrats Seosamh, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
De Burca Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Thank you for reading and kind comment
A   Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 1:36 PM
Seosamh, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "PAIN GETS IN THE WAY OF FORGIVENESS" if you'd like..... Love LINDA
De Burca Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Thank you for reading and comment and your very kind placement in your wonderful contest. It is such an honour to be placed with so many wonderful and talented poets. Thank you Linda for all your support to me and so many others in PS.
Vaso Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 12:33 AM
This is a very powerful and beautiful write! A7
De Burca Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 8:24 PM
Thank you for your kind comment and rating, you humble me. Sorry for the long delay in replying to your generous comment. I appreciate it very much.
Rhinem Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 10:56 AM
† Noticing Your Beauty's Enchanting Avatar, But Then Again, I Have Forever Been Drawn Unto Her Splendours; These Beauty's She Holds, Amid Her Perfect 'Creation' ˜ This Is A Powerful First Post At Her Loving PoetrySoup ˜ I Love The Metaphors And Yet All Do Live....Beyound The Night ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ My Love, Always, John
De Burca Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 1:11 PM
Thank you for reading and comment on my poem.
A   Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 9:47 PM
Seosamh, Congratulations with your awesome winning free verse poem... xox~ LINDA
De Burca Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 7:01 AM
Thank you again for your support and taking the time to read my poems.
Mishra Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 12:24 AM
marvelous....so touching,etching the emotions perfectly.
De Burca Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 11:45 AM
Hi, thank you for your kind comment and for reading my poem.
Roberts Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 7:35 PM
Wow this is beautiful ...congrats ....Seren
De Burca Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 8:21 AM
Hello and thank you for your kind comment and taking the time to read.
Long Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:52 PM
congrats on your win in the contest. take care cory
De Burca Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Hi and thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Morrison Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:32 PM
Beautifully written! Congrats and thanks for submitting to my contest. Kim
De Burca Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Hi Kim and thank you for the chance to enter your competition, I really appreciate it.
A   Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 9:20 PM
I love the way you write, so far I noticed all your poems are about Mother Nature' ... this poem is deep and sad.... and still comes out with hope at the end. Much sorrow, can pour many rains.... enjoying all your poems so far. I have a few more to go. Hope you do not mind that I have enjoyed all your poems, and I have marked you as a favorite poet. always~ Linda
De Burca Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 8:34 AM
Linda thank you for your very generous and kind comments on my poems. I am flattered that you enjoyed them as I have enjoyed your poems so much. I do enjoy writing about nature as it frees and raises my spirits. I have so many of your poems to read yet but I will get to them all. Keep sharing your talent with us so we can all enjoy the wonder of feelings you capture in all your pieces.
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 4:35 AM
A touching, but beautifully written poem Seosamh. - Well done. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
De Burca Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 12:51 PM
Thank you again for reading and leaving a positive comment on another of my poems. Strangley it was a comfort writing this piece after loosing my parents even though I was in a lonely place it helped with the healing.
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