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Whispers

Whisper from the Gods Breathing your life details In the winds whisper.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/27/2009 5:11:00 AM

Dear Elizabeth, I must agree with Raul and Chris the first to lines capture "the winds whisper YOUR Talent for Haiku is untouchable Superb Write LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Date: 6/3/2009 10:34:00 AM

I like how you use the concept of "whisper" in this poem. Gives one a sense of serenity. Enjoyed it. Have a nice day. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/3/2009 4:21:00 AM

Ah, thought provoking while it touches all our senses. Excellent. Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 6/2/2009 10:38:00 PM

I also enjoyed the first and second line, they capture so much...Raul

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/2/2009 1:26:00 PM

The first two lines are amazing...what a way to look at this ..well done.