Whispers

Whisper from the Gods
Breathing your life details
In the winds whisper.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 27, 2009 at 5:11 AM
Dear Elizabeth, I must agree with Raul and Chris the first to lines capture "the winds whisper YOUR Talent for Haiku is untouchable Superb Write LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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June 3, 2009 at 10:34 AM
I like how you use the concept of "whisper" in this poem. Gives one a sense of serenity. Enjoyed it. Have a nice day. Karen
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June 3, 2009 at 4:21 AM
Ah, thought provoking while it touches all our senses. Excellent. Love, Shar
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June 2, 2009 at 10:38 PM
I also enjoyed the first and second line, they capture so much...Raul
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June 2, 2009 at 1:26 PM
The first two lines are amazing...what a way to look at this ..well done.
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