Whispers

trees whisper of fall
leaves begin yearly splendor
 ...all lives have cycles


8-16-2020
'Haiku - Nature Themed 2' Poetry Contest
3rd place
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Deepa Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 2:10 AM
Yes ,all lives have cycles.. Brilliant imagery Jeanne mam.Loved it.:-) Congratulations on your wonderful win. You were so eager to return back to Mexico.. Are you back?..I believe your doing well:-) Keep writing and keep inspiring us. Take care.Much love sent to you..
Daniel Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 6:22 AM
I see this beauty has won, congratulations, Jeanne:)
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 5:18 PM
autumn is rapidly approaching, congrats on your win Jeanne:-) hugs jan xx
Kerr Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 4:47 PM
Jeanne, This evocative work deserves every accolade. Congratulations on your medal winning placement. Superb writing. Howard
Ranaweera  Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 2:43 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jeanne. I can here tree's whisper. Final line convincingly concludes the appreciation, with a note of generation!!
Roper Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 8:25 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jeanne, great imagery. Hugs Eve
Ermine Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 4:43 PM
Agree with all comments. Congratulations on a solid Win, Jeanne.!
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 1:26 PM
so true, and so softly expressed with whispers! Congrats on your win.
Kitchin Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 12:40 PM
Jeanne, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku!
Kauffman Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 11:49 AM
"To everything there is a season" so wonderfully expressed in your haiku Jeanne. Congratulations on your winning placement!
Pettit Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 11:34 PM
That season is not too far away right now, and you have described it quite well in just three lines.
Mcgee Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 5:54 AM
Thanks Robert...the smell is definitely in the air..
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