Whispers

Close your eyes
calm your breathing
and still the beating of
you heart in your ears
You must listen carefully,
others have mistaken it
but I know you can hear
the whispers my heart makes
when ever you're near
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Krutsinger Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 10:30 AM
this is delicate and pretty
Chamberlain Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 2:23 PM
I enjoyed your poem.shortband sweet, just how I like them. Beautifully written.
Ahmad Avatar
October 4, 2008 at 2:59 AM
beautiful :)
Sheart Avatar
October 3, 2008 at 4:42 PM
Hello Trudy Oh so beautiful! Sounds like true love to me... Many blessing to you and yours hun! Love Light Truth Patricia
Anos Avatar
September 28, 2008 at 8:48 PM
Sweet!!! Maybe you should make this a song or something. It'll be a really good one. :o)
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