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Whispering Wings of Wisdom

The bird took off into the sky Beginning a journey of its own It gathers views from each mile high To always remember where it's flown With raindrops on feathers, sunshine too Beginning a journey of its own Through clouds of all shapes and sky that is blue It's time to soar and time to let go With raindrops on feathers, sunshine too To catch the wind and ride in its flow A journey of learning from each sight It's time to soar and time to let go Wisdom is gathered with each day of flight Whispering wings, tracing the travel A journey of learning from each sight Allowing restraints to unravel The bird took off into the sky Whispering wings, tracing the travel It gathers views from each mile high Heidi Sands 7/23/23

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Date: 7/26/2023 3:19:00 AM
Good Morning Heidi. Hello. This entry is very poetic in its entirety including and starting with your title. I enjoyed your theme. Be proud of your wonderful execution. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful morning and day. a Take Care (smile)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/26/2023 7:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Lisa. I appreciate your support very much. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 7/25/2023 5:59:00 PM
Flying along with the bird, Heidi, great poem:)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/26/2023 7:32:00 AM
Thank you Joanna. I appreciate your support :)
Date: 7/25/2023 11:55:00 AM
Hello Heidi, oh, I read this poem several times. I can vision the bird soaring into the sky on a journey. It will be my fav. Hugs. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/26/2023 11:27:00 AM
Hello Heidi, you are welcome. I will. i hope you have a nice day to. Hugs./Darlene\
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/25/2023 11:57:00 AM
Oh, that is nice to hear. Thank you so much, my friend. I appreciate the Fave too. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 7/24/2023 8:09:00 PM
Beautiful capture of a bird's wisdom in flight, Heidi. Keep on soaring! :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/25/2023 6:23:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. I appreciate your comments :)
Date: 7/23/2023 7:13:00 PM
Well written, Heidi! I enjoyed reading this rhythmic write! Blessings, Kim M
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/24/2023 5:47:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I am happy you enjoyed this :)
Date: 7/23/2023 3:38:00 PM
Much enjoyed the hues the bird sees--lovely poem, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/24/2023 5:47:00 AM
I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you Vijay :)

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