Whispering Wings of Wisdom

The bird took off into the sky
Beginning a journey of its own
It gathers views from each mile high

To always remember where it's flown
With raindrops on feathers, sunshine too
Beginning a journey of its own

Through clouds of all shapes and sky that is blue
It's time to soar and time to let go
With raindrops on feathers, sunshine too

To catch the wind and ride in its flow
A journey of learning from each sight
It's time to soar and time to let go

Wisdom is gathered with each day of flight
Whispering wings, tracing the travel
A journey of learning from each sight

Allowing restraints to unravel
The bird took off into the sky
Whispering wings, tracing the travel
It gathers views from each mile high

Heidi Sands

7/23/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ricci Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 3:19 AM
Good Morning Heidi. Hello. This entry is very poetic in its entirety including and starting with your title. I enjoyed your theme. Be proud of your wonderful execution. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful morning and day. a Take Care (smile)
Sands Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 7:33 AM
Thank you very much Lisa. I appreciate your support very much. I hope you have a nice day :)
Daniel Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:59 PM
Flying along with the bird, Heidi, great poem:)
Sands Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 7:32 AM
Thank you Joanna. I appreciate your support :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Hello Heidi, oh, I read this poem several times. I can vision the bird soaring into the sky on a journey. It will be my fav. Hugs. /Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 11:27 AM
Hello Heidi, you are welcome. I will. i hope you have a nice day to. Hugs./Darlene\
Sands Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 11:57 AM
Oh, that is nice to hear. Thank you so much, my friend. I appreciate the Fave too. I hope you have a nice day :)
Wolf Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 8:09 PM
Beautiful capture of a bird's wisdom in flight, Heidi. Keep on soaring! :) gw
Sands Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 6:23 AM
Thank you Gershon. I appreciate your comments :)
Merryman Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 7:13 PM
Well written, Heidi! I enjoyed reading this rhythmic write! Blessings, Kim M
Sands Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:47 AM
Thank you Kim. I am happy you enjoyed this :)
Pandit Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 3:38 PM
Much enjoyed the hues the bird sees--lovely poem, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:47 AM
I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you Vijay :)
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