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Whispering Wings

Whispering wings flutter
As the angel says to me,
Everything will be alright
If only you would look to see

The sun is shining bright
The blue skies surround you
Everything is clear to see,
When you look at the view

So lift your head
Bring clarity to mind
Fly with me a while,
See what you can find

Whispering wings flutter
As I begin to hear
More pleasant things around
Instead of worry and fear

I begin to feel warmth inside
As bitter cold knocks on my door
I begin to feel lighter
Not so heavy, anymore

I begin to flutter along,
Just like the whispering wings
Of an angel who spoke to me
As I follow, the song it sings

Heidi Sands

1/11/22

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Timothy Mcguire Date: 1/17/2022 5:56:00 PM Yes if we can take the time to see what good we do have in our lives we will be happier. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/19/2022 6:10:00 AM Yes , so true Timothy. You have stated it perfectly. Thank you :)

Lindsay Laurie Date: 1/17/2022 5:51:00 PM Hello Heidi ... I can't comment on whispering wings as I'm unsure, but I am certain that nature speaks to us when are amongst the natural beauty. Even so, I did enjoy reading your poem with good rhyme and flow - thank you Heidi - Lindsay Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/19/2022 6:08:00 AM Thank you Lindsay. It came from my imagination of an angel in nature. I appreciate your comment and honesty. I hope you have a nice day :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/16/2022 12:38:00 PM Your "Whispering Wings" is a Beautiful write. I would love to see an angel. I know people that have seen them. Have a blessed day/week.................. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/16/2022 2:05:00 PM Thank you so much Paula . I hope you have a great week :)

Joe Dimino Date: 1/14/2022 6:52:00 PM Oh I believe very much in angels, and their beneficent fluttering. Heaven has many helpers -- if we quiet ourselves, we can hear their voices clearly -- Silence is not only Golden, it allows for a choir of loving guides to sing to us their blessings. Love your healing, hope lifting whispering-winged words. Great write my friend! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/15/2022 6:27:00 AM Thank you Joe. I appreciate your kind feedback on this. I hope you have a nice day :)

Joseph May Date: 1/14/2022 6:00:00 AM Sometimes we need that divine reassuring voice, Very nicely penned Heidi.. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/14/2022 9:52:00 AM Yes, true Joseph. Thank you for your kind comment :)

Mike Gentile Date: 1/13/2022 11:20:00 AM Such sweet and lovely thoughts Heidi! a delicate message of encouragement and positive thinking! A beautiful write indeed, Happy Thursday xxoo Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/14/2022 9:52:00 AM Thank you Mike. I appreciate your kind message. Happy Friday :)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/12/2022 6:28:00 AM This lovely poem is faith filled beauty at it’s best Heidi. I loved it! Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/12/2022 7:18:00 AM Hi Connie. It is nice to see your comment today. I am happy you loved this. Thank you. Happy New Year! Blessings :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/12/2022 1:00:00 AM Inspiring and uplifting, dearest, Heidi. Blessings. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/12/2022 5:21:00 AM Thank you very much Demetrios. I hope you have a nice day. Blessings :)

M. L. Kiser Date: 1/11/2022 4:06:00 PM This is beautiful, wonderful feeling to the poem. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/11/2022 4:23:00 PM Thank you M.L. it is nice to hear that. I hope all is well :)

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 1/11/2022 10:32:00 AM Lovely, Heidi. Your verse speaks of hope and leaves you with a warm feeling of peace. May you always hear whispering wings. Good luck, I think it's a winner! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/11/2022 10:34:00 AM Thank you Sandy. I wasn't fully sure with all the writer's block lately. I am happy to read your kind feedback! Blessings, my friend :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/11/2022 10:25:00 AM You take your reader on an aerial journey Heidi. Hope your new year is off to a good start. Tom Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/11/2022 10:32:00 AM Thank you Tom. I appreciate your kind comment very much. It is going ok. I am trying to get by. Today is very cold, below zero with wind too. I hope your New Year is going well for you :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/11/2022 10:14:00 AM This is a delightfully rhythmic and soothing poem, Heidi. I enjoyed the ride on whispering wings through your words blending in nature and emotions. Awesome angelic tenor to your ending stanza. A FAVE for me. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/11/2022 10:16:00 AM Hi Vijay. Thank you so much for your kind words and considering it a fave. I have been struggling so much with writers block and trying to get through it. Your comment has made my day. I appreciate always :)