Jane Bowen Poet Personification

Whispering Wind

Whispering wind through the trees

Blowing comfort amid your breeze

How you dilute ones misery 

Surely a miracle one could agree

Fill me up with serenity

Take your time …drift through me

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Sara Kendrick July 18, 2009 at 8:26 AM Great writing using personification of the wind. I enjoyed it. Keep writing.Sara

John Loving Iii June 9, 2009 at 4:03 PM short and sweet. yes you did it this time. this is a great peace. John H Loving III

L'Nass Shango June 5, 2009 at 12:26 PM mmm ... a pleasure trove is found within the comfort of your words, sublime!

Sharon Winter June 1, 2009 at 7:12 AM Jane, thank you so much for that warm and wonderful congrats! Appreciate it so very much. Love, Shar

Sharon Winter May 13, 2009 at 5:37 AM The wind often does feel miraculous. Beautiful write. Love, Shar

Laura Mckenzie May 12, 2009 at 3:20 PM Nature is a soothing thing for anyone's heart well done! Laura :)

John Loving Iii May 12, 2009 at 3:17 PM it is the caress of a loving God. John loving iii