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Whispering Wind

Whispering wind through the trees

Blowing comfort amid your breeze

How you dilute ones misery 

Surely a miracle one could agree

Fill me up with serenity

Take your time …drift through me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/18/2009 8:26:00 AM
Great writing using personification of the wind. I enjoyed it. Keep writing.Sara
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Date: 6/9/2009 4:03:00 PM
short and sweet. yes you did it this time. this is a great peace. John H Loving III
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Date: 6/5/2009 12:26:00 PM
mmm ... a pleasure trove is found within the comfort of your words, sublime!
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Date: 6/1/2009 7:12:00 AM
Jane, thank you so much for that warm and wonderful congrats! Appreciate it so very much. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/13/2009 5:37:00 AM
The wind often does feel miraculous. Beautiful write. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/12/2009 3:20:00 PM
Nature is a soothing thing for anyone's heart well done! Laura :)
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Date: 5/12/2009 3:17:00 PM
it is the caress of a loving God. John loving iii
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