Kash Poet Poet Haiku

Whispering Rain

whispering rain
          outside the window....
                           raining whisper


softly spoken words
             getting embarrassed....
                            sound of silence


second's hand ticking
                 an old wall clock....
                              sound of time


dragging its feet
                 time moving slowly....
                               a silent future




© kashinath karmakar
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 30, 2012 at 9:41 PM congrats Kash on another top ten win for excellence in poetry luv..

Black Eyed Susan January 30, 2012 at 3:10 PM You really capture the moment here! Congratulations on your win :)

Lizanne Scholtz January 30, 2012 at 11:22 AM Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write Kash, Elizabeth

Bob Quigley January 30, 2012 at 10:26 AM Very deep Kash. Congratulations

Carol Sunshine Brown January 30, 2012 at 7:29 AM Congratulations on your placement Kash. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 30, 2012 at 3:06 AM Congratulations Kash (catching up after my week away so sorry if I'm late) x

Nette Onclaud January 30, 2012 at 2:15 AM well rendered in a language so divine, kashi... applause for your grand win!..:) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 5, 2011 at 11:40 AM Congrats Kash on this poem making it to first round competition in PS contest my friend.. G.L. luv.

Debbie Guzzi August 4, 2011 at 8:28 PM congrad's on your big win! If you areon facebook and would like to join our haiku group e'd love to have you? Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown August 3, 2011 at 8:26 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Kashinath. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

John Freeman August 2, 2011 at 9:44 AM Kashinath, Good Luck! Congratulations on your poem's capture of the first round. Agape, Moses

Elaine George August 2, 2011 at 4:08 AM Superb writing Kash. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie

Constance La France July 1, 2011 at 9:35 AM Congratualtions on your featured poem this week, just lovely

Dr.Ram Mehta June 28, 2011 at 5:47 AM My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, kashinath

Debbie Guzzi June 27, 2011 at 1:45 PM interesting short writes congrad's on your feature! Light & Love

Sara Kendrick June 27, 2011 at 12:21 PM Enjoyed reading your Homepage Featured work...Congrats...Sara

Carrie Richards June 27, 2011 at 8:04 AM Such a wonderful group of haikus, Kashinath, each one stands wonderfully on it's own! Congratulations on your featured work this week! love, Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown June 27, 2011 at 5:03 AM Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Kashinath. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 27, 2011 at 4:16 AM congrats Kash on your featured poem this week on PS my friend.. an amazing one to share luv...

Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 6:20 AM Congratulations Kashinath on your well deserved 1st place win for your poem in Charles Henderson's contest "String Haiku". Love, Carol

Elaine George February 20, 2011 at 7:06 PM Brilliant!!!! many congrats on your well deserved first place win with this masterfull string Haiku, Kashinath.Lainie

Sami Helbaoui February 18, 2011 at 10:55 AM I have to say this is the first time i love a String Haiku... This was wonderful.. Love it, Sami.. all the best congrats for winning first place

Sharon Ruebel February 17, 2011 at 10:17 AM This is outstanding and amazing Kashinath! One of your best I dare say..... Love it Congratulations on your First Place!! Lov, Shar

James Foulk February 16, 2011 at 2:21 PM really loved this Haiku, they say so much in such few words. a beautiful write.

Deb Radke February 15, 2011 at 3:46 PM Wow! What an amazing string of haiku. Congratulations on your first place honor. Love, Deb

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