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Whispering Rain

whispering rain
          outside the window....
                           raining whisper


softly spoken words
             getting embarrassed....
                            sound of silence


second's hand ticking
                 an old wall clock....
                              sound of time


dragging its feet
                 time moving slowly....
                               a silent future




© kashinath karmakar
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/30/2012 9:41:00 PM congrats Kash on another top ten win for excellence in poetry luv.. Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 1/30/2012 3:10:00 PM You really capture the moment here! Congratulations on your win :) Login to Reply

Lizanne Scholtz Date: 1/30/2012 11:22:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write Kash, Elizabeth Login to Reply

Bob Quigley Date: 1/30/2012 10:26:00 AM Very deep Kash. Congratulations Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/30/2012 7:29:00 AM Congratulations on your placement Kash. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 1/30/2012 3:06:00 AM Congratulations Kash (catching up after my week away so sorry if I'm late) x Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/30/2012 2:15:00 AM well rendered in a language so divine, kashi... applause for your grand win!..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/5/2011 11:40:00 AM Congrats Kash on this poem making it to first round competition in PS contest my friend.. G.L. luv. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/4/2011 8:28:00 PM congrad's on your big win! If you areon facebook and would like to join our haiku group e'd love to have you? Light & Love Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/3/2011 8:26:00 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Kashinath. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 8/2/2011 9:44:00 AM Kashinath, Good Luck! Congratulations on your poem's capture of the first round. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 8/2/2011 4:08:00 AM Superb writing Kash. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 7/1/2011 9:35:00 AM Congratualtions on your featured poem this week, just lovely Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/28/2011 5:47:00 AM My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, kashinath Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/27/2011 1:45:00 PM interesting short writes congrad's on your feature! Light & Love Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/27/2011 12:21:00 PM Enjoyed reading your Homepage Featured work...Congrats...Sara Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 6/27/2011 8:04:00 AM Such a wonderful group of haikus, Kashinath, each one stands wonderfully on it's own! Congratulations on your featured work this week! love, Carrie Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/27/2011 5:03:00 AM Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Kashinath. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/27/2011 4:16:00 AM congrats Kash on your featured poem this week on PS my friend.. an amazing one to share luv... Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/24/2011 6:20:00 AM Congratulations Kashinath on your well deserved 1st place win for your poem in Charles Henderson's contest "String Haiku". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 2/20/2011 7:06:00 PM Brilliant!!!! many congrats on your well deserved first place win with this masterfull string Haiku, Kashinath.Lainie Login to Reply

Sami Helbaoui Date: 2/18/2011 10:55:00 AM I have to say this is the first time i love a String Haiku... This was wonderful.. Love it, Sami.. all the best congrats for winning first place Login to Reply

Sharon Ruebel Date: 2/17/2011 10:17:00 AM This is outstanding and amazing Kashinath! One of your best I dare say..... Love it Congratulations on your First Place!! Lov, Shar Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 2/16/2011 2:21:00 PM really loved this Haiku, they say so much in such few words. a beautiful write. Login to Reply

Deb Radke Date: 2/15/2011 3:46:00 PM Wow! What an amazing string of haiku. Congratulations on your first place honor. Love, Deb Login to Reply

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