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Whispering Pines

Whispers fill the air,
In the language of the breeze;
Spoken by the pines.

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Elaine George

October 29, 2009 at 10:18 PM

Dear Raul, You are a master of the Haiku. Simply beautiful ! To my favorite list this goes. Lainie

Charlene Bird

April 17, 2009 at 9:57 AM

I haven't seen a haiku in a long while, but, this was worth the view, great work!

Steve Edmonds

March 29, 2009 at 9:53 AM

The language of the breeze, I don't know how you do it, but great job.

Daniel Neal

March 27, 2009 at 3:17 AM

Shhh, listen to the whispers, nice job. DN

Danielle Moreno

March 25, 2009 at 2:23 AM

Awesome haiku Raul................Danielle

Chris Goombi

March 25, 2009 at 1:30 AM

Nice use of language.

Elizabeth Neal

March 24, 2009 at 7:19 PM

Brilliant haiku, the language of the breeze. Love E.

Sharon Winter

March 24, 2009 at 11:40 AM

Heavenly imagery. Sweeps me off my feet. Love, Shar

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 24, 2009 at 11:14 AM

Dear Raul, Super Awesome Haiku YOU would like to come to my cabin surrounded by Pines We could sit and listen then pen the whispers ALWAYS...HG

Abe Lopez

March 24, 2009 at 8:47 AM

sweeeeet! listening to the pines speak, thats gangsta! great j.o.b.

Jim Wilson

March 24, 2009 at 8:18 AM

You've doe it again. Really first rate. Thanks.

Tyesha Ehigiator

March 24, 2009 at 8:01 AM

Wonderful haiku, I love the images it leaves in my mind..When the wind blows it whispers so beautifully, never heard anything like it before.Very creative as per you...GB, Tyesha

Carrie Richards

March 24, 2009 at 7:50 AM

Shhhhh.....let's see if we can hear what they are saying :) !!

Lena Townsend

March 24, 2009 at 6:19 AM

Wow, this one speaks to my heart as I imagine through your words these great pines towering high above me and the wind whistling through the limbs. Wonderful, adding this one to my favs. Smiles from Lolita