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Whispering Pines

Whispers fill the air, In the language of the breeze; Spoken by the pines.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/29/2009 10:18:00 PM
Dear Raul, You are a master of the Haiku. Simply beautiful ! To my favorite list this goes. Lainie
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Date: 4/17/2009 9:57:00 AM
I haven't seen a haiku in a long while, but, this was worth the view, great work!
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Date: 3/29/2009 9:53:00 AM
The language of the breeze, I don't know how you do it, but great job.
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Date: 3/27/2009 3:17:00 AM
Shhh, listen to the whispers, nice job. DN
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Date: 3/25/2009 2:23:00 AM
Awesome haiku Raul................Danielle
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Date: 3/25/2009 1:30:00 AM
Nice use of language.
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Date: 3/24/2009 7:19:00 PM
Brilliant haiku, the language of the breeze. Love E.
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Date: 3/24/2009 11:40:00 AM
Heavenly imagery. Sweeps me off my feet. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/24/2009 11:14:00 AM
Dear Raul, Super Awesome Haiku YOU would like to come to my cabin surrounded by Pines We could sit and listen then pen the whispers ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/24/2009 8:47:00 AM
sweeeeet! listening to the pines speak, thats gangsta! great j.o.b.
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Date: 3/24/2009 8:18:00 AM
You've doe it again. Really first rate. Thanks.
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Date: 3/24/2009 8:01:00 AM
Wonderful haiku, I love the images it leaves in my mind..When the wind blows it whispers so beautifully, never heard anything like it before.Very creative as per you...GB, Tyesha
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Date: 3/24/2009 7:50:00 AM
Shhhhh.....let's see if we can hear what they are saying :) !!
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Date: 3/24/2009 6:19:00 AM
Wow, this one speaks to my heart as I imagine through your words these great pines towering high above me and the wind whistling through the limbs. Wonderful, adding this one to my favs. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/24/2009 4:36:00 AM
I believe this to be true! great haiku! Raul! very well crafted, imparts a mysterious feel, cool!
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Date: 3/24/2009 3:47:00 AM
Another wonderfully done Haiku...love the cool images that makes this work.
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Date: 3/23/2009 10:47:00 PM
Never thought of the air being whispers. Nice poetic impression. Tyler
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