Whispering of Silence

While listening to the note of 
stupid silence ,
often I forget to stop
my naked soul.

How faintly it peeps into the shadow,
framed in the body 
of a piece of wind !
  

A lullaby of a cascade 
echos through the blue rain drops.

The ardent flames of my dying eyes 
rush to the secret windows of  mind
to scratch a geometry 
of my open sky....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Beautifully crafted. Well done. I truly enjoyed this.
Smith Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 2:03 PM
A very lovely flow to the write.
Deb Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 10:00 AM
thank you dear poet.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 8:08 AM
This is quite well expressed, especially the last stanza.
Deb Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 11:36 AM
Thank you so much for have the eyes here .Regards..Nilima
Callus Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 10:00 AM
Beautiful and expressive, Nilima. The secrets that live in the corners of our minds are slowly revealed through a semi-abstract form of poetry. Regards // paul
Deb Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Thank you dear poet for your valuable comment which inspire !s me.Regards .
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 9:45 PM
wow, this is VERY fine writing of free verse here. You have the knack!!!
Deb Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 6:42 AM
Thank you dear poetess for your visit and appreciation .
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 11:36 AM
Beautiful expression! Sunita :)
Deb Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 11:44 AM
thank you for your visit and comment dear poetess.
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