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Whispering of Silence

While listening to the note of stupid silence , often I forget to stop my naked soul. How faintly it peeps into the shadow, framed in the body of a piece of wind ! A lullaby of a cascade echos through the blue rain drops. The ardent flames of my dying eyes rush to the secret windows of mind to scratch a geometry of my open sky....

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Date: 9/27/2018 12:42:00 PM
Beautifully crafted. Well done. I truly enjoyed this.
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Date: 10/18/2016 2:03:00 PM
A very lovely flow to the write.
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Nilima Deb
Date: 10/19/2016 10:00:00 AM
thank you dear poet.
Date: 10/18/2016 8:08:00 AM
This is quite well expressed, especially the last stanza.
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Nilima Deb
Date: 10/18/2016 11:36:00 AM
Thank you so much for have the eyes here .Regards..Nilima
Date: 9/26/2016 10:00:00 AM
Beautiful and expressive, Nilima. The secrets that live in the corners of our minds are slowly revealed through a semi-abstract form of poetry. Regards // paul
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Nilima Deb
Date: 9/27/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thank you dear poet for your valuable comment which inspire !s me.Regards .
Date: 9/15/2016 9:45:00 PM
wow, this is VERY fine writing of free verse here. You have the knack!!!
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Nilima Deb
Date: 9/16/2016 6:42:00 AM
Thank you dear poetess for your visit and appreciation .
Date: 9/14/2016 11:36:00 AM
Beautiful expression! Sunita :)
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Nilima Deb
Date: 9/14/2016 11:44:00 AM
thank you for your visit and comment dear poetess.

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