Gershon Wolf Poet Alexandrine

Whispered Passions Exploding

The worn path was so perfect, the moment just right
  Autumn's foliage tin forest's shy light
The gay colors, bright patterns of orange, yellow, red
  Whispered passions exploding, fireworks overhead

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Caren Krutsinger June 30, 2019 at 12:10 PM Your imagery almost makes me wish for autumn. I say almost because I have barely enjoyed a bit of summer yet, and autumn means my work resumes. Gershon Wolf June 30, 2019 at 6:24 PM Yes, definitely. Let's have a real summer first. Autumn will be here in due time anyway, before we know it, really.

Jennifer Proxenos June 29, 2019 at 11:25 AM Love is in the air, be the season Autumn or fair - once again awesome imagery and a vivid imagination! Hugs, Jennifer. Gershon Wolf June 29, 2019 at 10:42 PM You are too kind. Just trying to tread water with some of the great poetry I read on the Soup every day. Thank you so much, Jennifer. Warm wishes, Gershon

Ralph Sergi June 29, 2019 at 10:19 AM A very unique poem Gershon! Gershon Wolf June 29, 2019 at 10:41 PM Thank you so much for the encouragement, Ralph. Much appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon

Arturo Michael June 28, 2019 at 10:08 PM Overhead and all around...Nice one Gershon Gershon Wolf June 29, 2019 at 10:41 PM A little July 4 preview here, Arturo. Best wishes, gw

Panagiota Romios June 28, 2019 at 10:00 PM Excelkent Panagiota Gershon Wolf June 29, 2019 at 10:40 PM Thanks you so much, my friend. Appreciate the support. 'g'

Mystic Rose Rose June 28, 2019 at 9:14 PM I love fireworks anytime, nice write Gershon Gershon Wolf June 29, 2019 at 10:40 PM Pixie, I appreciate your support. Next fireworks coming right up this coming Thursday... :) gw

Heidi Sands June 28, 2019 at 6:26 PM Beautiful! Well written :) Gershon Wolf June 29, 2019 at 10:39 PM Appreciate your kinds words, Heidi. Thank you so much. Best wishes, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues June 28, 2019 at 6:09 PM I want to explore this tin forest! Nice! Gershon Wolf June 29, 2019 at 10:39 PM OK. The forest's trail is well marked with both arrows and bread crumbs. Tours depart every 15 minutes. Thanks for the encouragement, Kim! :) gw