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Whispered Dreams

As I whisper like the winds across the sea I whisper my hopes and my dreams Like the tattered words of my mind My soul has been thrown and scattered across the sea As I whisper, is she the one across the sea Could this be Love that I see As I whisper, She is like a dream in my mind That shakes me to the core How could this be, this power she has over me And yet, would I have it any other way, this Love across the sea As I whisper, all that could be; she holds all of my hopes and dreams As I whisper, like the warm breeze across the sea Her Love surrounds me and brings me to my knees Begging, God please let me be the man that she needs me to be

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Date: 6/26/2010 11:16:00 AM
wonderful, this is wow. good luck in the contest. an dwelcome to the soup.
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Date: 1/27/2010 7:08:00 PM
Love the title. Your inspirational view in the last line speaks of your faith. Sounds like love to me. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/27/2010 8:47:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. continue to share your creative writings with us all as this delightful poetry today... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup...
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Date: 1/27/2010 7:38:00 AM
Was a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry this morning Casey. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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