Aurore Severo Poet Free verse

Whispered Desire

The idea tickles me
far away places
rose petals in the wind
fantasies
gallant knights
on bicycles
pass me by
I gaze at gardens sunset
my wheelchair
takes me
to
loneliness


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Gail Debole June 22, 2022 at 5:46 PM "my wheelchair takes me to loneliness" is the line that provides the twist to elevate this poem. Excellent.

Harry Horsman July 9, 2021 at 11:13 PM To loneliness indeed, but the mind that controls the hand that holds the pen, is full of poetic beauty. 'Don't do Facebook Aurore, but will try and find you.

Jan Allison July 1, 2021 at 11:37 AM what unique imagery and not a white knight on a horse then Aurore, I find the ending tinged with sadness, So lovely to see you posting again:-) hugs Jan xx

Christuraj Alex July 1, 2021 at 11:22 AM my wheelchair takes me to loneliness Wonderful.

Mahtab Bangalee June 29, 2021 at 10:57 PM nice that is; feel some good imagery