Thomas Wells Poet Haiku

Whisper Wind

                                      Breathing whisper wind,
                                     Secret lifting easy breeze.                                       
                                       Swishing rustling sighs.

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Christina Bowring May 20, 2024 at 9:26 AM Dear Thomas, this is a wonderful haiku. Love your choice of words that say so much - the whispering of winds and the secrets in the breeze. Very expressive. Really enjoyed it. Blessings to you. Thomas Wells June 18, 2024 at 9:53 PM Thank you, Christina! I really appreciate your sensitivity. I love writing haiku. You can compress so much beauty into a select few words. Have a wonderful day!

Brian Sambourne February 6, 2024 at 8:30 PM What superb "s" alliteration in your very fine Haiku, Thomas. That final line captures a personified wind in a sigh of release, perhaps of its secrets, or its energy. Your work never disappoints. Be well. Brian Thomas Wells February 8, 2024 at 1:52 AM Your insights are always sensitive and, on the mark, Brian! Thank you again! Take care! Thomas