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Whisper Unheard

Relentless venom in a still river seeing out it's weak. Tainted beauty cries pure, sweet, eternity. What was then could not be now. Such tales surely hold mistaken ground. A whisper heard, a voice in the wind, Shadows sweep over, darkness begins. With each taste there's little pain. His burning venom numbs my veins. Rid me from such despair, beyond this paralyzed nightmare. Bring me back to that still river, let me hear such tales again. Let the wind voice it's worries, before it's darkness see's me in. March 12, 2016

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Date: 3/26/2016 8:58:00 PM
Deep poem Kimberly
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Date: 3/14/2016 12:48:00 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Kimberly :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck in contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kimberly Heller
Date: 3/14/2016 10:34:00 PM
Thank you! :) :)
Date: 3/13/2016 10:00:00 AM
Welcome to the soup, I hope you enjoy your time here. This is an excellent first offering.
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Kimberly Heller
Date: 3/13/2016 10:35:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/12/2016 9:26:00 PM
Hi Kimberly, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Kimberly Heller
Date: 3/12/2016 10:30:00 PM
Hi Skat! Thank you! I look forward to reading your work!
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Date: 3/12/2016 9:28:00 PM
Hi, Kimberly LOL, I kind of super clicked the validate button, that's why my comment appears twice. HUGS
Date: 3/12/2016 9:25:00 PM
Hi Kimberly, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/12/2016 11:08:00 AM
Great work, Look forward to your next post, welcome to the family...
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Kimberly Heller
Date: 3/13/2016 10:46:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie!
Date: 3/12/2016 4:05:00 AM
Kimberly, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Kimberly Heller
Date: 3/12/2016 5:36:00 AM
Thank you I look forward to reading and writing more! Ill be reading much more tonight! I've been writing for fun for years but without any formality (or any understanding of it for that matter). I wanted to learn more and came across this awesome website! What better way to learn than networking with others?! Cant wait!