Whisper Something Sweet

In the darkness of despair
A night lonely and haunting
Whisper something sweet in my ear
Feed my heart’s longing

Who else but you
With your breath’s magic
Can my anguish undo?
With words un-strategic

In the world burning with apathy
I seek a drop of dew
For soul exceedingly thirsty
My eye’s raindrops are few

Let calm and serenity prevail
On desolate ravished soul
In body’s mobile jail
On journey to my goal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/20/2010 12:43:00 PM
This is really really nice, Mohammed. I am glad I found a poet like you among my other new friends! Luv,andrea
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Date: 1/9/2010 12:11:00 AM
Nice poem. I like your wring style. Good luck.
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Date: 1/7/2010 9:44:00 AM
You write very well, Mohammad. Will have to read more-as time permits! I enjoy your poems-so far! Great write! Thank you for reading my poem and the kind, encouraging comments, also. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/2/2010 7:20:00 PM
Excellent write, sincere with love emiting from the verses.
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Date: 12/7/2009 11:24:00 AM
Brother, the candle of this love poem burns into the eyes of the darkest night ... good write
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Date: 12/2/2009 1:56:00 AM
Mohammad this is a wonderful poem. It is great to find other fellow Arab poets on this site. You are very talented. I can't wait to read more of your poetry :) Love, Maya.
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Date: 12/1/2009 10:08:00 AM
A joy to read! love Simone
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Date: 11/29/2009 4:35:00 PM
Good use of rhyme and imagery for a thought provoking poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/27/2009 5:28:00 PM
The first two stanzas were especially inviting. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/24/2009 4:53:00 AM
Wonderful poetry you present to us today Mohammad. I hope your week finds you with an overflow of inspiration which you may use to inspire others. Love and blessings to you, Carol
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Date: 11/24/2009 3:08:00 AM
'Ellen's Fone and the Whisperers'
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