Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Whisper In My Ear - For Sami

"Brightest diamonds shine in darkest rooms,
willing hearts bleed out love for me and you"

Whisper close towards a frightened ear  
soothe a shaken soul   scared tonight
hold onto hopes of flight filled wings
where a painted rose will rise and sing

Carry my crutch just a little bit more
for when the south winds blow again
across flowing strands of love and care
my heart and spirit will be right there

Living moments in locked up dreams
no longer a little blue penguin burrowing
freeing fairy tale fantasy finally come true
glowing in the dark because the shine of you

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Darren White March 30, 2017 at 4:23 AM thank you for writing this for sami, she read it to me and i loved it, and i love you for writing such a sweet poem especially for her :)

Nette Onclaud March 29, 2017 at 2:26 PM so heartwarming that even ' fairy tale fantasy comes true..' perfect stuff, tim!..huggs

Maria Williams March 29, 2017 at 1:55 AM What a lovely poem for your friends Darren and Sami. Darren is a wonderful young man, the first to welcome me to Poetry Soup. He is going to be very moved by this wonderful gesture.

Darren White March 29, 2017 at 12:07 AM Hi I am Sami,not Darren! I don't want to write in Darren poetry site but you write this for me! And I just want to say thank you. It is beautiful. My brother sometimes write a poem for me but never someone else, so now i am very glad. Thank you Tim.

Claudia Polydoro March 28, 2017 at 10:10 PM Tim, You did such a beautiful poem to Sami! Beautifully written my friend. And Sami, thank you for taking such good care of our Darren, and still keeping us updated with your messages. You've no idea how much we appreciate all your thoughtfulness :*

Sara Ella March 28, 2017 at 9:34 PM Tim <3 Sami will love this! Sami shines! :D So TRUE

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2017 at 7:34 PM this is very sweet and I like anne-Marie's word for it "endearing" Sounds like Sami is a dear heart.

Anne-Marie Coreggia March 28, 2017 at 6:14 PM What a beautiful and endearing poem Tim. It will no doubt bring a smile on their face. Amitiés

Arthur Vaso March 28, 2017 at 5:29 PM Tim, this is so nice, such a beautiful poem, I confess brought tears to my eyes! The line "Brightest diamonds shine in darkest rooms" so so so true.

Carolyn Devonshire March 28, 2017 at 4:14 PM How wonderful it is to have family members providing inspiration for outstanding poetry like this, Tim. Soo beautiful! I hope Sami reads it and knows he has a special, talented father whose love will always be there.

Seren Roberts March 28, 2017 at 3:42 PM Oh Tim.... Sami and Darren will love this, well deserved praise for a devoted sister and brother...Seren

Jan Allison March 28, 2017 at 2:45 PM Oh Tim I am sure both Sami and Darren will have tears when they read this - what a fabulous tender tribute to his lovely sister:-) hugs Jan xx7 Tim Smith March 28, 2017 at 2:51 PM Thanks Jan, I hope it brings a smile as well.

Charmaine Chircop March 28, 2017 at 2:44 PM Such a beautiful poem Tim ...Beautiful indeed..Gonna fave this gem.Im sure Sami will read this. Tim Smith March 28, 2017 at 2:50 PM Thanks Charma...Darren asked her to read him some poems. : )

Chris Green March 28, 2017 at 2:34 PM Nice tribute to the one taking care of our good friend in his time of pain and recovery. This was a really nice thing to do Tim. Both of them will love it. Tim Smith March 28, 2017 at 2:44 PM Thanks Chris, it is the least I could do for her.

Lisa Ricci March 28, 2017 at 2:25 PM Oh Tim. How exquisite and stunning your opening couplet is. So very beautiful and poetic. Your poetry and words shine. Entries such as this is why we read. Your middle quatrain is very expressive and emotional. A true pleasure to read. Well done entirely. Tim Smith March 28, 2017 at 2:43 PM Thank you Lisa...you humble me with your wonderful comment.