Whisper

WHISPER

I whisper to the atmosphere
my universe of life
nobody responds
as I fall into
myself

I whisper to the ocean tide
my cleansing sanity
waves curl in on me
as I drown into
ice shelves

I whisper to oblivion
not giving in to pain
never sleep or die
fallen angels my
farewell




© Kim van Breda—11 February 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 9:07 AM
- A lovely small poem, dear Kim - (Is that picture of you? .... I do not recognize you :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Van Breda Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 9:22 AM
Hi Anne Lise. Thank yoi for your wonderful encouragement as always. Yes..I updated my picture to a more recent one :)
Zuma Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 5:52 AM
it a cute poem
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