Whisper

What is the sound that makes me lean closer?
Hearing your voice, low and sweet
I just have to smile.
So pleasing is the sound
Persuasion slides into your tone
Endearing you to me further
Relenting, I will agree to whatever you want.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 20, 2010 at 7:01 PM
"Persuasion slides into your tone". I really like this line. Enjoyed the poem a lot.
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March 20, 2010 at 5:32 PM
The soft voice of he, in persuasion say. For his whisper> his voice, as i lay down he says > lovely Acrostic >> James
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March 20, 2010 at 4:34 PM
Very good! I will have to practice this type of write. Thanks!
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