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Whisper

What is the sound that makes me lean closer? Hearing your voice, low and sweet I just have to smile. So pleasing is the sound Persuasion slides into your tone Endearing you to me further Relenting, I will agree to whatever you want.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/20/2010 7:01:00 PM
"Persuasion slides into your tone". I really like this line. Enjoyed the poem a lot.
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Date: 3/20/2010 5:32:00 PM
The soft voice of he, in persuasion say. For his whisper> his voice, as i lay down he says > lovely Acrostic >> James
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Date: 3/20/2010 4:34:00 PM
Very good! I will have to practice this type of write. Thanks!
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