Whiskey Sour

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Bucket full of coins and lint
From pockets of the passing
He sits there staring silently
His sign board does the asking

Truth be told he only wants
Money for his drink
His sign expresses honestly
What the passers by all think

Why Lie, Need Booze 
is written on his card
But, to look this man right in the eye
Is really something hard

He doesn't smile, is dressed for warmth
Even though it is quite warm
I don't think it's for the weather
It's for his own internal storm

That rips apart inside his soul
A storm that no one's seen
It knocked him on a wayward course
He lost who he might have been

We'll never know just who he was
We only know him at this hour
For those who pass him here each day
He's known as Whiskey Sour

He sits there with his plastic tub
Watching people on their way
Whiskey Sour thanks them kindly
No matter what they say

A victim of his own devices
Or a victim of all ours
No matter where you walk and look
You will all meet Whiskey Sours.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/7/2018 1:20:00 PM
Hello Roger, yes you are right. There is always a whisky sour. i see him every so often. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/6/2018 9:22:00 AM
This poem makes us stop and think about how we react to someone standing on the corner holding a sign. Nicely written, Roger. John
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Date: 5/5/2018 4:07:00 PM
Magnificent Roger, thank you for sharing.
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