Trudy Diane Rider Poet Free verse

Whirlwind of Desire

Like a whirling dervish he blew into my life
full and fire and desire
a love of life that was contagious
with the smile and laughter, open as a prairie sky
quick to blow into a storm
yet gentle as a summer breeze
he consumed my heart and left me wanting more
the whirlwind of desire blowing freely through my long hair
making his will my own
till we became so tangled in love
that his consuming fires turned towards me
and together we whirl across the prairie lands
consumed in each other
and the whirlwind of our desire.

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Ismael Nieves October 24, 2009 at 11:20 AM Outstanding imagery you have there! Still revolving huh. That's so sweet.

L'Nass Shango April 22, 2009 at 8:05 AM Love they say is a many splendoured thing ... thanks for your comments on my poem. Great write ... peace and smiles to your house.

Derrick Burton April 21, 2009 at 5:17 PM Thank you for your comments recently and look forward to reading another new poem from you. Enjoy your weekend.

Debbie Guzzi April 21, 2009 at 11:31 AM very vivid love poem, try my Martial Acts. LighT & Love "the whirlwind of our desire" great line

James Peranteau April 20, 2009 at 4:44 PM Great write Trudy,..TY,..and TY for the congrats. james

Derrick Burton April 14, 2009 at 3:30 PM nicely written and also so beautiful, almost like silk blowing in a smooth breeze.