Whirlwind of Desire

Like a whirling dervish he blew into my life
full and fire and desire
a love of life that was contagious
with the smile and laughter, open as a prairie sky
quick to blow into a storm
yet gentle as a summer breeze
he consumed my heart and left me wanting more
the whirlwind of desire blowing freely through my long hair
making his will my own
till we became so tangled in love
that his consuming fires turned towards me
and together we whirl across the prairie lands
consumed in each other
and the whirlwind of our desire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/24/2009 11:20:00 AM
Outstanding imagery you have there! Still revolving huh. That's so sweet.
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Date: 4/22/2009 8:05:00 AM
Love they say is a many splendoured thing ... thanks for your comments on my poem. Great write ... peace and smiles to your house.
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Date: 4/21/2009 5:17:00 PM
Thank you for your comments recently and look forward to reading another new poem from you. Enjoy your weekend.
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Date: 4/21/2009 11:31:00 AM
very vivid love poem, try my Martial Acts. LighT & Love "the whirlwind of our desire" great line
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Date: 4/20/2009 4:44:00 PM
Great write Trudy,..TY,..and TY for the congrats. james
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Date: 4/14/2009 3:30:00 PM
nicely written and also so beautiful, almost like silk blowing in a smooth breeze.
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