Whirlwind

Has anybody 
searched
or thought about
the secret place
in the heart
where a breeze
or a whirlwind
starts?
How did Cain
come to blood
and brother Abel 
remain mild?
Did they differ 
from the start
or their actions
set them apart?
A reed shaken 
by the wind
and a captain 
steadfast 
in his will
differ by 
a choice made
to persist
till harbor is reached
or be swept
by the whirlwind
of sin.


Fifth Place: Blowing in the Wind Contest-9/19/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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La France Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:59 AM
Frances, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement !
Pandit Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:44 AM
Congrats Frances!
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September 19, 2017 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations Frances :)
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