Whirlpools of Passion

Her fervent eyes, 
  
Irresistible whirlpools of passion, 
     
Invited me dare plunge into their thrilling
 
Waters of pleasure 

Where 

My enamored heart, would be enchanted 

By 

The delightful currents of awaiting love! 




© Demetrios Trifiatis
    22 August 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Tor Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 8:53 PM
Nice Demetrios. I rate this one a 7
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 5:22 AM
Michael, you so kind. Thank you!
Nunez Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 3:02 AM
You come up with increasing degree of passion and beauty in your love poems these days, sire. Love them! hugs!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 5:23 AM
I am happy that you feel it, dear Kim. Certain it is that your heart not different than mine. Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 12:22 PM
- My friend Demetrios, this is really beautiful, I enjoy reading it :) - a 7 !!! - I wish you a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 5:25 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much. Hope soon you will be writing again!
Manassian Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 11:17 AM
Very passionate write, my dear poet. Passion suits you, as does wisdom.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 5:31 AM
Thank you dear poetess for your honoring comment and visit!!
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 10:52 AM
oooohhh, now this one is eddying with pure passion!!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 5:37 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Mission accomplished!
Smith Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 4:33 AM
Very beautiful and full of love. Have a great day my friend
Trifiatis Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 7:41 AM
Thank you, Tim for your gracious visit and comment! A appreciate it my friend!
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 4:18 AM
WOW! Hugs Jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 7:41 AM
Thank you, Jan! xxx
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