Whirlpool Glass Art Haiku

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Whirlpool 
         



opposing current  
tides swirling downdraft vortex
blown canvas of glass

5/30/2016

# 9  Glass Art 

8/28/2014, first poem submitted in poetry soup

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/8/2016 3:19:00 PM
How wonderful!! This is so lovely.. :) :)
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Date: 6/7/2016 12:44:00 AM
I think you captured the essence of the photo Eve. Well done!
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Date: 6/6/2016 1:17:00 PM
love the swooshing, gliding effect, eve...a winner for me..huggs
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Date: 6/6/2016 7:43:00 AM
Crystalized wording gives birth to the picture! Fantastic dear, Eve! A seven!
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Date: 6/6/2016 5:42:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one...Describes the picture very well..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara
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Date: 6/4/2016 11:29:00 PM
The artist speaks! Loved this! I haven't been around as much, hope you and hubby are doing ok!
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Date: 6/4/2016 2:17:00 PM
Very good. Thanks.
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Date: 6/3/2016 11:10:00 AM
Excellent one..Reads like a winner in this contest..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 6/2/2016 9:04:00 PM
VERY nice, Eve!!! I hear hubbie in the driveway. Dang and I had only two comments to go!!
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Date: 6/1/2016 12:58:00 PM
Beautifully done, Eve!
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Date: 6/1/2016 6:57:00 AM
Beautiful interpretation of the image. Powerful haiku. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/31/2016 8:40:00 AM
very nice
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Date: 5/31/2016 6:52:00 AM
Love your interpretation here, Eve. A powerful Haiku that paints that image. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/31/2016 2:13:00 AM
lovely this is Eve, enjoyed and good luck in the contest:)... ~Linda~
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Date: 5/31/2016 1:41:00 AM
Nice one, Eve. All the best for the contest. ~karam~
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Date: 5/30/2016 9:03:00 PM
This Haiku and that picture are a "canvas" in and of itself! The best to you in this contest!
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Date: 5/30/2016 8:08:00 PM
.....And that is our life. Lovely haiku Eve conforming to the glass art....probir
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Date: 5/30/2016 8:06:00 PM
.....And that is our life. Lovely haiku Eve conforming to the glass art....probir
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Date: 5/30/2016 8:01:00 PM
lovely interpretation of the image Eve - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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