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7/2/2025 for Shaped Haiku 2 Poetry Contest sponsored by JCB Brul

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Date: 7/3/2025 9:23:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your Haiku though I felt a bit dizzy afterwards lol. It looks complicated doing the shapes. Emilia : )
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