Whining While Dining On Cheese


Everyone who knows me-  knows I whine,
          About the weather winter, spring, summer and fall;
And at my frequent wine and cheese where we dine,
    On my sofa, us girls chat and drink and eat and sprawl.

In winter, I like to complain about the cold,
          While sipping red wine and eating aged cheddar;
I am dreaming and wishing for that sun of gold, 
        All the time wrapped in a thick wool cozy sweater.

In spring, I like to tell everyone about rain,
             That darn constant rain that falls all the time;
I sip bianca, munch havarti, oh such a pain,
     And my friends nod, nod but they never ever chime.

In summer, I like to tell all how hot it is,
         The forever heat and that unbearable blazing sun;
Oh, pass the brie and lets raise the fizz,
           My favorite place, the pool floating for all day fun.

In fall, I let people know that I am sad,
     I gulp a glass of grape vino and bite some blue cheese;
Soon cold will come back and it will be bad,
          I know, listen to me girls-   it will be a deep freeze.

      Now, pass the bottle never mind the glass, PLEASE.  

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August 1, 2016


Poetry/Rhyme/Whining while Dining on Cheese
Copyright Protected, ID 16-813-244-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym. 

For the contest, Here's My Whine
Now Pass The Cheese
sponsor, Phillip Garcia

Third  Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 8/15/2016 10:13:00 PM
A very creative approach to the 'whining' theme, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your podium win in this Premiere contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/15/2016 11:49:00 AM
Hi Bw, It's so good to see you on the winners list. Congratulations on your 3rd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/15/2016 10:37:00 AM
That was Gouda. Congratulations BW...
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Date: 8/15/2016 6:35:00 AM
SO CUTE Broken Wings! I love the flow greatly, it makes me smile :) congrats on your placement lovely lady :)-luloo
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Date: 8/15/2016 4:52:00 AM
Greetings BW, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/15/2016 1:59:00 AM
Great piece and perfectly on point. I chuckled each time I read it all the while (in my best southern voice) saying "mmhmm girl I know that's right".
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Date: 8/13/2016 8:15:00 AM
Fun and funny.
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Date: 8/2/2016 10:01:00 AM
Yaaaay, my kind of girl. Fun write, you moaning Minnie, now uncork another one :) Viv x
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Date: 8/2/2016 9:22:00 AM
Ha ha..couldn't help laughing aloud:) Superbly written:)
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Date: 8/2/2016 6:27:00 AM
Excellent. Love this write. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 8/2/2016 6:26:00 AM
Excellent. Love this write. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 8/2/2016 3:28:00 AM
Love the humour Constance - give me the cheese over the whine any day :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/1/2016 11:46:00 PM
Don't worry friends I am not a drunk, its just a poem for a contest ~
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