Lioness Onpaper Poet Nonet

Whine

In
Soft dreams ,
I deeply 
Wish to feed your 
Aggressively dumb 
Soul an ounce of hopeful
Grace , For in the most deepest
Whispers, your attempts just fail the
Pigments you've promised in poor papers,
O, how the endless blood I've spilled , like
Oozing arrows aimed between those
eyes, yet you wobble and the 
Spear just miss, don't beg for
Chances , I've sent so 
Many your way, 
Now sit and 
Whine for 
Me.

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David Kavanagh March 12, 2026 at 12:09 PM Sit and whine (the swine) lol, whoever it is took on the wrong Lioness, these reverse nonets are really catching on, so always best to hit the paper whilst the iron is hot, just as well that target wobbled or it was curtains for them, brilliant palpable angst! Cheers David Lioness Onpaper March 13, 2026 at 4:20 AM Hahaha the swine !!!! I love that!!! Why didn’t I think of that! XD … thank you so much for visiting my page n enjoying my piece..

Lin Lane March 12, 2026 at 10:52 AM You hit the train tracks with a full head of steam! I think the only hope for one with an 'aggressively dumb soul' is confession, and repentance or getting thrown off the train. There are only so many chances afforded such a one. Love your angst, Lioness! Lioness Onpaper March 12, 2026 at 11:10 AM Hahahah … with full steam ahead .. XD… thank you for enjoying my piece ..

Laurentine G March 12, 2026 at 10:38 AM Powerful!!! I love that ending! Welcome to the nonet train haha! <3 I'm buzzing from those last lines, so good!! Lioness Onpaper March 12, 2026 at 10:43 AM Hahahaha …on the train now chooochoooo mami!!