Whimsy

Whimsy

Cunning, quick-witted

Driving,  thrusting, liberating

Souls connection, awakening the self

effectuating, heeding, heading

staunch, steadfast

Realism


03/19/16

Diamante poetry contest
Contest judged: 10.21.16
First Place

3rd placer in another contest (May 15, 2016)

Poem of the Day ( March 20, 2016)

Featured on PS Homepage 
as Poem of the Week (Marh 27, 2016)

Note: The poem is about reverie

conflictconfusiondesiredestinyfantasydiamante

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Teddy Kimathi

October 25, 2016 at 5:09 AM

Awesome all the way!!! Congrats Moon, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Moon Flower

October 26, 2016 at 1:48 AM

Haha those punctuation marks! Thanks Teddy. ;)

Sandra Haight

October 24, 2016 at 6:47 PM

Congratulations, Moon Flower, on your First Place win, for such a well-written Diamante about these opposites. Hugs, Sandra

Moon Flower

October 26, 2016 at 1:50 AM

Thank you for the kind words, Sandra. Nice to see you here. :)

Just James

October 23, 2016 at 1:49 PM

Brilliant piece!

Moon Flower

October 26, 2016 at 1:51 AM

Thank you, James. :)

Anna-Marie Docherty

October 23, 2016 at 5:23 AM

Congratulations on this well considered piece and its first placing in the diamante contest, well done!

Moon Flower

October 23, 2016 at 9:31 AM

Thanks Anna. :)

Sara Kendrick

October 22, 2016 at 1:54 PM

Congrats on your great winner..Way to go for the contest..Sara

Moon Flower

October 23, 2016 at 9:31 AM

Thank you Sara :)

Kim Rodrigues

October 22, 2016 at 8:33 AM

Congrats, Moon Flower!

Moon Flower

October 22, 2016 at 1:07 PM

Thank you, Kim. :)

Darren White

October 22, 2016 at 4:05 AM

I love the sweet opposites. Congratulations :)

Moon Flower

October 22, 2016 at 1:08 PM

Thank you Darren. :)

Agnes Krampe

October 21, 2016 at 9:35 PM

Congrats on your win, Moon Flower.

Moon Flower

October 22, 2016 at 1:08 PM

Thank you Agnes. :)

Janis Medders Tobechi

October 21, 2016 at 8:33 PM

Well written diamante. I enjoyed the "whimsy". Congratulations on your win and thanks for being in the contest.

Moon Flower

October 22, 2016 at 1:09 PM

Thank you as well for placing my diamante in your contest, Janis. :)

Teddy Kimathi

May 18, 2016 at 8:11 AM

Your piece indeed is a literary gem!! Congrats Moon, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Moon Flower

May 19, 2016 at 1:17 AM

Thank you for the kind words, Teddy.

Sandra Haight

May 16, 2016 at 9:20 AM

Sun, congratulations on your nice win in the 'Any Poem Not For A Contest, Ever' contest. Great Diamante! Hugs, Sandra

Moon Flower

May 19, 2016 at 1:16 AM

Thank you, Sandra.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 16, 2016 at 9:17 AM

- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower

May 19, 2016 at 1:16 AM

Thank you, sunshine.

Joseph May

April 25, 2016 at 8:16 AM

Very good Diamante Moon Flower ..enjoyed

Moon Flower

April 25, 2016 at 8:36 AM

Thank you, Joseph. :)

Jaquay Atkins

April 19, 2016 at 11:28 AM

This is clever

Moon Flower

April 25, 2016 at 5:03 AM

Thank you, Jaquay.

Manmath Dalei

April 18, 2016 at 10:56 PM

A powerful write. Outstanding placement of wordings. Well penned. I enjoyed............with love.

Moon Flower

April 19, 2016 at 12:30 AM

Much appreciated, Manmath.

Skat A

March 20, 2016 at 11:12 PM

Moon Flower, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Moon Flower

March 21, 2016 at 8:43 PM

Hello SKAT. Thanks for such inspiring comment. :) Hugs!

Moon Flower

March 20, 2016 at 11:36 PM

Thanks, Eve. :)

Eve Roper

March 20, 2016 at 10:25 PM

Congrats on POTD

Moon Flower

March 20, 2016 at 10:43 PM

Thanks, Eve. :)

Richard Lamoureux

March 20, 2016 at 4:09 PM

Congrats on POTD

Moon Flower

March 20, 2016 at 9:58 PM

Thanks, Richard. :)

Casarah Nance

March 20, 2016 at 9:27 AM

Enjoyed! Grats on poem of the day

Moon Flower

March 20, 2016 at 9:31 AM

Thanks Casarah! :)

Moon Flower

March 20, 2016 at 9:28 AM

Haha, I will. Thanks for the kind words, Winged Warrior. :)

Winged Warrior

March 20, 2016 at 8:57 AM

Congratulations Moon Flower on POTD!!!...welcome aboard the Starship Soup... fasten your seat belts its going to be a great ride...god bless...(:^WW^:)

Moon Flower

March 20, 2016 at 9:31 AM

Haha, I will. Thanks for the kind words, Winged Warrior. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 20, 2016 at 8:03 AM

- Wooowww ... your first poems, "Moon Flower" !!!! - Congratulations : Poem of the Day !!!!! - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower

March 20, 2016 at 9:24 AM

All I wanted was just to share my pieces here and nothing else. But, suddenly, here you are guys congratulating me for something I did not expect to happen. That was too quick!! Haha. Thanks a lot Anne-Lise. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 19, 2016 at 2:54 PM

- Thank you for your first poem, Fleur :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower

March 19, 2016 at 9:10 PM

Thanks for the kind words, Anne. :) Hugs.

Poet Destroyer A

March 19, 2016 at 9:29 AM

Flour De Lune, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Moon Flower

March 19, 2016 at 10:02 AM

Hi Poet Destroyer A, thank you so much for the kind words. :) I'll try my best to share more of my original poems. I'm just new so I'm kind of trying to figure out some things here. Maybe I could start visiting your poems and post some comments a bit later. Please to meet you, Linda. :)

Whimsy

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