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Whimpering served as a surrender sign. All are frail and can swoon at any time. Fairness could be a thoughtful chart design. Whimpering served as a surrender sign. If choices are curbed, staying calm is fine. With this resolve, you will face any grime. Whimpering served as a surrender sign. All are frail and can swoon at any time.
Written: May 29, 2023

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Date: 5/30/2023 7:10:00 AM
WoW! Lasaad, I echo what my fellow poet below said. Excellent job. Have a great day my friend:-)Alexis
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Date: 5/30/2023 2:18:00 AM
Like Andrea, I loved your triolet.
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Date: 5/29/2023 6:47:00 PM
you make a good triolet, my friend.
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