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Poetic Form: Tanka
Inspired: 2024 July 17
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Gift of memory while my presence of my past know acts of kindness should I have cause to forget ~ Heaven always remember

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Date: 7/18/2024 6:24:00 AM
Aww…love this! Heaven always remember…remember our smiles…joy…our incline to His word…our “othering” ((hugs))
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/18/2024 7:08:00 AM
Ah! You're a natural gift Kim, from the day your parents unwrapped you and shared your rarity to the world, Aloha from Hawaii

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