While You Go

Walking by the broken bridge,
Your hand in mine and your eyes shut,
Unsure footsteps lagging behind,
Until I pull you forward with a tug.

That sigh of relief when you cross,
Looking back at what you've traded,
The hand in mine just a bit cold,
But firmly still in place.

"Be brave" I say laughing,
"It's just a little height" indeed.
You huff and stride ahead,
"I'll get there, you'll see" you promise.

"What have you got to lose?
What frightens you so?" I wonder.
"What if I fall?" comes a broken whisper,
"And what if you fly?" your eyes sparkle.

That day, witnessing your unwavering feet,
As you made your way to the bridge,
I felt my heart swell and constrict,
With equal parts pride and loss.

You look back one last time,
At all that you are taking with you and leaving behind.
"She fell" they shrieked in agony,
Choosing to mourn your broken hopes.

You indeed had nothing to lose, love,
"No. She flew" celebrating the wings that set you free.
You saw the world when it was blue,
So I gave up on trying to save you now.



Inspired by song: Listen Before I Go
By: Billie Eilish


Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 10:32 PM
Nice poetic narration. Congratulations.
Canerdy Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 4:58 PM
Upasana, your poem made me smile~~ then tear up! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Peranteau Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 5:54 AM
hm..so..thankfully you've only been with us for a few yearn('cauze i read your writes..if you were here since mine, i might be comment'n sum'X in 2028 ') mine belated Welcome. much love
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