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While We Dream

in a garden hammock we lurch ~ two muddy bunnies perch on our laps 25 August 2020 For Silent One's "When plans don't go to plan poetry contest"

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Date: 9/6/2020 7:44:00 PM

Great Monoku JCB. Congrats.

Date: 8/29/2020 6:12:00 PM

oh this is such a cute image!! I hope it scored high. Congrats. Love this.

Date: 8/29/2020 1:23:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning line, JCB :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 8/29/2020 12:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. "in a garden hammock" I would love to be with two little bunnies. Enjoy your win and day......

Date: 8/29/2020 11:04:00 AM

Great imagery in just one line Monoku, JCB . Congratulations on your win.

Date: 8/29/2020 3:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Date: 8/25/2020 9:27:00 AM

LOL...muddy paws and all...hope the puppy doesn’t try to join you ;)