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While We Dream

in a garden hammock we lurch ~ two muddy bunnies perch on our laps







25 August 2020


For Silent One's "When plans don't go to plan poetry contest"

Copyright © JC Brul | Year Posted 2020

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September 6, 2020 at 7:44 PM

Great Monoku JCB. Congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

August 29, 2020 at 6:12 PM

oh this is such a cute image!! I hope it scored high. Congrats. Love this.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 29, 2020 at 1:23 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning line, JCB :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith

August 29, 2020 at 12:14 PM

Congratulations on your win. "in a garden hammock" I would love to be with two little bunnies. Enjoy your win and day......

August 29, 2020 at 11:04 AM

Great imagery in just one line Monoku, JCB . Congratulations on your win.

August 29, 2020 at 3:48 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

August 25, 2020 at 9:27 AM

LOL...muddy paws and all...hope the puppy doesn’t try to join you ;)

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