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While the Fun Lasts

Lulubelle and Annabelle hats in hand Found a magic fantasy fairyland Wearing their fancy knickers And matching party slippers Frolicked unaware of nearby quicksand AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted December 30, 2017

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/2/2018 3:06:00 PM

Life can be so tricky, Line...one moment it sends us high with joy, the next it drops us down to earth with a thud! Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/2/2018 3:37:00 PM

O you noticed. Thanks for your visit Paul.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/1/2018 9:18:00 AM

This brought a smile. Good luck in the contest. happy New Year Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/1/2018 10:19:00 AM

Thank you, Richard. Best wishes for the new year.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/31/2017 10:13:00 PM

Such fun! GL in contest, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/1/2018 9:01:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. Best wishes for the new year.

John Fleming

Date: 12/31/2017 3:42:00 PM

You do funny so very well, line...it is an admirable trait in this seriously desperate world of ours. Allow me to wish you a fulfilling and contented New Year - Cheers, Line!! Best regards! :) john

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/31/2017 9:15:00 PM

Thank you, John. Most appreciated. Very best wishes to you in the new year.

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 12/31/2017 4:33:00 AM

Lol. Love this, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/31/2017 8:43:00 AM

Thanks, Rhoda. Happy New Year.

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/30/2017 8:10:00 PM

Good one Line, best wishes in the. Contest and the New Year...

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/30/2017 8:50:00 PM

Thanks, Charlie. Have an awesome new year.