While the Fun Lasts

Lulubelle and Annabelle hats in hand
Found a magic fantasy fairyland
Wearing their fancy knickers
And matching party slippers
Frolicked unaware of nearby quicksand


AP: 3rd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Callus Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 3:06 PM
Life can be so tricky, Line...one moment it sends us high with joy, the next it drops us down to earth with a thud! Regards // paul
Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 3:37 PM
O you noticed. Thanks for your visit Paul.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 9:18 AM
This brought a smile. Good luck in the contest. happy New Year Line.
Gauthier Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Thank you, Richard. Best wishes for the new year.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 10:13 PM
Such fun! GL in contest, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 9:01 AM
Thank you, Kim. Best wishes for the new year.
Fleming Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 3:42 PM
You do funny so very well, line...it is an admirable trait in this seriously desperate world of ours. Allow me to wish you a fulfilling and contented New Year - Cheers, Line!! Best regards! :) john
Gauthier Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 9:15 PM
Thank you, John. Most appreciated. Very best wishes to you in the new year.
Tripp Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 4:33 AM
Lol. Love this, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Thanks, Rhoda. Happy New Year.
Smith Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 8:10 PM
Good one Line, best wishes in the. Contest and the New Year...
Gauthier Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 8:50 PM
Thanks, Charlie. Have an awesome new year.
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