Home » Poems » Jcb Brul » While Sky's In Slumber

While Sky's In Slumber

winking moon behind saffron clouds playing hide-and-seek with the stars and me 21 February 2022 "A Brian Shortie Poetry Contest" Sponsored by Brian Strand 1st place

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/9/2022 12:37:00 AM

I picture this and I smile because the moon has a face and winking eyes.

Hilo Poet

Date: 2/28/2022 4:53:00 PM

Nicely penned tanka, JCB, love the imagery my friend, Aloha~William

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 2/27/2022 7:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place. Your Tanka is amazing! Love ~ Mala

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 2/25/2022 12:11:00 AM

Loved this...so creative...Hugs...~ Ani

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/23/2022 11:56:00 PM

So sweet ~ congrats, JCB

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/23/2022 3:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win with this amazing tanka. Blessings xxoo

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/23/2022 8:43:00 AM

Lovely, expressive use of personification, JCB! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2022 4:20:00 PM

oh I adore this. Was it in a contest. If so, I hope it won.

Valsa George

Date: 2/21/2022 6:01:00 PM

A cheerful tanka.... ! Love the hide and seek game.

Silent One

Date: 2/21/2022 9:44:00 AM

Lovely imagery and tanka... nice play with words...