1st in The Beatles Lay Contest (Sponsor: Charles Messina)
Judged: August 16th, 2025
lady of the tiger tattoo, i, the lonesome hunter in queue, bathe your toes, obscenely straining, a beleaguered virtue waning while my guitar gently weeps, i should scold desire, but hearts deny seekers trapped by your auburn waves do meet their ends in many caves
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