While Mother Nature Lies Abed

Seasons change when Mother Nature turns in her sleep
A few months of Spring are all we're allowed to keep
But in those months, flowers bloom and bees take flight
The perfumed scent of jasmine drifts in the air at night

The world is filled with color, and streams begin to flow
It's time for rebirth; seedlings planted, and as they grow
we enjoy the chatter of songbirds, feathering their nests
The first will always be the well-dressed, Robin Red Breast

Nature turns and we're swimming on a hot summer day
Soaking up the sun on a well-deserved vacation get-away
Enjoying picnics in the park and rides at the county fair
It's the season of love's interludes and fireworks in the air

When Summer's foliage turns crimson and begins to fall
Mother has grown restless and brisk breezes come to call
Forests are all ablaze as though leaves are flames of fire
Temperatures cool when Autumn and Nature conspire

Can you feel Fall's caress and the gentleness of its kiss?
Welcome its whispered warnings or you will be remiss
The billowing breezes it offers, beginning in September
bring feast days of Thanksgiving; a holiday to remember

Mother yawns and stretches, but she's not ready to rise
She's hibernating like a bear, rubbing her sleepy eyes
The saffron sun warms the earth, his light is embossed
spreading a golden sheen on blankets of Winter's frost

One by one, the seasons await their turn to flourish
Nature's calendar tells her when to feed and nourish
She's stirring, but hesitant to leave the comfort of bed
While snow falls one last time, she will rest her head

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Date: 8/20/2020 8:47:00 PM
Great verse and well written, Jenna, congratulations on your win.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/21/2020 6:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for that, Eve.
Date: 8/20/2020 4:35:00 AM
Another 1st place winner!! Good job Jenna! Look at you go.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/21/2020 6:27:00 AM
Your encouragement is so very appreciated, Mark. Thank you.
Date: 8/12/2020 1:15:00 PM
In my estimation you have captured one of life's natural treasures in this poem. To be in tune to the changing of the seasons is a joy.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/12/2020 4:46:00 PM
Your comments are generous and so very welcome. Thank you, Kenneth. I enjoy every change. I think Autumn is my favorite.
Date: 8/12/2020 8:44:00 AM
Delightful! Wonder how this lovely work would sound recited with Vivaldi's lovely music? Great writing!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/12/2020 4:45:00 PM
It would sound like a symphony of seasons, Joe! Some bird chirping, a little April shower, an Autumn breeze and the sound of jingling bells, since snowfall is hushed. Love the idea, and thanks for your thoughts.
Date: 8/12/2020 3:35:00 AM
Just checking in before I head off, will need another break, grandsons wearing me out lol. Beautiful stroll through the seasons Jenna, I never get tired of them. Good luck Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/12/2020 6:57:00 AM
haha Tom. You take all the time you need for R&R, but not too long, for your humor and comments will be missed. Be careful and enjoy!
Date: 8/12/2020 1:21:00 AM
"Mother yawns and stretches, but she's not ready to rise She's hibernating like a bear, rubbing her sleepy eyes" - this personification of the seasons is remarkably done Jenna. Wow! Beautiful work!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/12/2020 6:57:00 AM
Thank you for so many generous comments you're leaving for me, Caren.
Date: 8/11/2020 4:01:00 PM
What a beautiful stroll through the changing of the seasons, nice imagery, Jenna, good luck in the contest. I must get on the ball if I am going to write for this contest. Hugs, John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/11/2020 5:13:00 PM
Hop to it, John, and thanks a lot for your happy thoughts.
Date: 8/11/2020 2:55:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful! Well written.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/11/2020 3:56:00 PM
I'm happy to read your thoughts, Mark.
Date: 8/11/2020 1:40:00 PM
Ditto, Jan! Aloha! Rico (The captcha code is MAP)
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Date: 8/11/2020 1:07:00 PM
what glorious personification and imagery Jenna, a joy to read:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/11/2020 3:55:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Jan. Your remarks are so gratifying.
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