While Living On the Clouds

Everything which
separates as useless
idealism, 
everything, but
sleep of leaning
gooseberries
evaporates and
floats. The skies
collected all the
warmth and
sweetness.
And I am nothing
just a mere winged
ant,
which chose to drop
its wings and settle
on a fiber
of fluffy
nothingness. I'll
pass 
through sun,
ignoring droughts of
ground,
 while living on the
cloud is coldest.

The skies have
gathered all the
noise:
atop of gentle
blades of grass
it blows and drizzle
in small beads
of folly
 bringing solutions
to the leaves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/4/2016 3:05:00 PM
No one ever goes to the old poems. What I did was add the word "CLOUD" into the soup's Advance search engine on the top. And your poem was among the cloud poems I was in the mood of reading. :) thank you for the soup mail. SKAT
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Date: 1/4/2016 12:57:00 PM
Emilija, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 7/28/2014 8:22:00 PM
ha, thank you for the reply lol
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Date: 7/27/2014 6:52:00 PM
WoW, this poem's enchanting and deep... Beautifully written, Emilija, Your poetry emanates a tangible way, that is surely out there on them clouds. enjoyed..Linda
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:15:00 AM
seems as joke- found how to reply;), so thank you again
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