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While Climbing the Rocks

While Climbing the Rocks Through trees and rains and Lakes I have lived, but today I shall remember, Remember the child who climbed rock mountains, Shutting out the city sounds and, Music of wind cuddling foothills and dreams. Dreams of a log cabin and dreams of love, With someone to share the quiet of the dove; Puttering with pursuits, watching horned toads play, On the side of a mountain looking away.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/5/2018 2:11:00 PM

Hello Sunlit Wanter, these are good memories. Have a nce day my friend.

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/23/2018 1:56:00 PM

Oh, your poem is such gorgeous reverie of a lovely childhood, Sunlite. wonderful idyllic imagery of a girl who dreamed of sharing a life of love and peace with a special someone. Just beautiful. Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/5/2018 6:21:00 PM

Thank you, Susan!

Silent One

Date: 1/31/2018 1:09:00 PM

Searching for such peace is perfect, if one can find it... great poem Sunlite..

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 2/4/2018 11:11:00 AM

Thank you. I grew up near low mountains and enjoyed hiking.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/30/2018 6:28:00 PM

Very scenic, and recalling sweet memories..a joyful depiction, SW.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 2/4/2018 11:14:00 AM

I appreciate your comments and your poetry.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/30/2018 5:29:00 PM

Sunlite, I just love this poem. You have written it perfectly. and I love the mountains and also live in a rustic cabin type home. I can really relate to this. Saving it as a favorite ! :)

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 2/4/2018 11:15:00 AM

I am so glad you enjoyed it. I liked to hike in nearby mountains when I was young.