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Which One is the Impatient One

Which one is the impatient belly dancer? My friend hissed. I do not like it when he gets close to my ear like this. Look at their mouths, I told him. He made about six guesses. No wonder he has had six wives.

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Date: 3/27/2022 10:03:00 AM
Hmmm...didn't get this one, Caren. What did he learn from looking at their mouths? I would have trouble focusing!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/27/2022 8:00:00 PM
The photograph that went with this one was obvious. It was a look of pure disdain from one of the dancers. I sometimes do not post photos here as it is so much extra effort.