Caren Krutsinger Poet Light Verse

Which One Is the Impatient One

Which one is the impatient belly dancer? My friend hissed.
I do not like it when he gets close to my ear like this.
Look at their mouths, I told him. 
He made about six guesses.
No wonder he has had six wives.

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L Milton Hankins March 27, 2022 at 10:03 AM Hmmm...didn't get this one, Caren. What did he learn from looking at their mouths? I would have trouble focusing! Caren Krutsinger March 27, 2022 at 8:00 PM The photograph that went with this one was obvious. It was a look of pure disdain from one of the dancers. I sometimes do not post photos here as it is so much extra effort.