Where's Your Scream

I can't bring myself to see
How you can just walk away
And Im the one who's crazy?
You know nothing about pain.

You dont seem to believe 
Theres such thing as solitude
And you seriously think
Despair has come to you?

You wonder why I scream to the skies
While you cant bring yourself to
You've filled your head with lies
You know nothing of solitude.

My screams go in and out of your ears
Hear them at your risk
But you're stuck in your own fears
Ones that don't even exsist.

Im still awaiting it
I still cant see
Perhaps you have no motivation?
Where's your scream?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/1/2012 6:26:00 AM
I know the feeling brother- a tension releaser. Poetry is also a great therapeutic medium.
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Date: 3/20/2012 2:41:00 PM
Anger management, lol, maybe some Mantra Chants might help. Nice poem, a few apostrophe errors you should correct i.e. I'm, can't, etc... Also the 4th passage, last line, exist is misspelled... Just FYI... Keep writing...
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Charles Jefferson
Date: 3/26/2012 12:22:00 PM
Thanks for the critique =)
Date: 3/16/2012 12:26:00 PM
When I scream to the skies, its because I mad at everything and frusterated at my position. The sky has no limits, so you are literally screaming everywhere. And screams, in some cases, aren't anger, but frustration or fear. Thanks for reading =)
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