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Where's Your Scream

I can't bring myself to see How you can just walk away And Im the one who's crazy? You know nothing about pain. You dont seem to believe Theres such thing as solitude And you seriously think Despair has come to you? You wonder why I scream to the skies While you cant bring yourself to You've filled your head with lies You know nothing of solitude. My screams go in and out of your ears Hear them at your risk But you're stuck in your own fears Ones that don't even exsist. Im still awaiting it I still cant see Perhaps you have no motivation? Where's your scream?

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Michael Smith

Date: 6/1/2012 6:26:00 AM

I know the feeling brother- a tension releaser. Poetry is also a great therapeutic medium.

Richard Mcclellan

Date: 3/20/2012 2:41:00 PM

Anger management, lol, maybe some Mantra Chants might help. Nice poem, a few apostrophe errors you should correct i.e. I'm, can't, etc... Also the 4th passage, last line, exist is misspelled... Just FYI... Keep writing...

Charles Jefferson
Date: 3/26/2012 12:22:00 PM

Thanks for the critique =)

Charles Jefferson

Date: 3/16/2012 12:26:00 PM

When I scream to the skies, its because I mad at everything and frusterated at my position. The sky has no limits, so you are literally screaming everywhere. And screams, in some cases, aren't anger, but frustration or fear. Thanks for reading =)