Where Wills Collide

Her eye, that of the explorer
     Aloof his, to ignore her

   A bout, where wills clash and collide
     where love on the outcome rides
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Tor Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 12:07 PM
Nicely written with a romantic tale. Thanks for sharing Gershon...
Wolf Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 7:38 PM
Hey, thanks for supporting my poetry, Michael. It's very much appreciated, Gershon
Kiser Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 2:02 PM
That magical moment, I wonder if he ever came around? Nicely done.
Bayles Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 9:07 PM
Much said in few words.
Wolf Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 12:36 PM
Thank you, Mike!
George Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 8:07 PM
Thus her exploring eyes arrested his, engendering love in four eyes. Love is quick to ignite. Beautiful, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Thank you, Valsa, and Happy Weekend to you! ~ Gershon
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