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Where Wills Collide

Her eye, that of the explorer Aloof his, to ignore her A bout, where wills clash and collide where love on the outcome rides

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Date: 1/21/2023 12:07:00 PM
Nicely written with a romantic tale. Thanks for sharing Gershon...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/21/2023 7:38:00 PM
Hey, thanks for supporting my poetry, Michael. It's very much appreciated, Gershon
Date: 1/20/2023 2:02:00 PM
That magical moment, I wonder if he ever came around? Nicely done.
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Date: 1/19/2023 9:07:00 PM
Much said in few words.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/20/2023 12:36:00 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 1/19/2023 8:07:00 PM
Thus her exploring eyes arrested his, engendering love in four eyes. Love is quick to ignite. Beautiful, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/20/2023 12:33:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa, and Happy Weekend to you! ~ Gershon

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