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~ Bite Size 92 Contest by Line Gauthier 10/9/24 ~

Come with me where wildflowers bloom Among weeds in the meadow we'll dance Each day we'll meet and hold hands at dusk delighting in the change of colors in the sky When the moon glows with pearlescent light we'll spend the night beneath a million stars

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 10/11/2024 11:11:00 PM

romantic write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/11/2024 6:30:00 AM

Dear Lin, Ahhh, you artistically encapsulated a romantic vision of love intertwined with nature. A wonderful celebration with such beauty of shared moments and the joy they bring. Good Luck on the Contest and I think you have a winner! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Lin Lane
Date: 10/11/2024 7:17:00 AM

Hi Daniel. thank you as always for you continued comments in support of my poetry. Grateful to have you as a friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/10/2024 12:00:00 PM

aww Lin this is so beautiful and romantic, could do with weeding out some artificial intelligence here, lol lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 10/10/2024 12:29:00 PM

Hold on there, Missy. Are you insinuating I used AI? hmmpphhh. Maybe you ARE a mean girl. ;-)

Jay Narain

Date: 10/10/2024 10:28:00 AM

Wow, very romantic.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/10/2024 10:35:00 AM

Thanks

John Read

Date: 10/10/2024 9:37:00 AM

Im on my way Lin. Xx

Lin Lane
Date: 10/10/2024 10:10:00 AM

Ha ha, John. No need to be in fear ~ I'm single. Thanks for commenting.

John Read
Date: 10/10/2024 9:38:00 AM

Tell your hubby I'm only joking.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/10/2024 3:49:00 AM

You paint a delightful romantic scene with your words Lin. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 10/10/2024 9:19:00 AM

blanc

Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/10/2024 5:16:00 AM

Red or white?

Lin Lane
Date: 10/10/2024 4:23:00 AM

aww thanks a lot, Tom. I visualized the scene, so I'm glad it came to life to you. Let's dance!

Sam Scott

Date: 10/9/2024 10:04:00 PM

What beautiful imagery is this? Lin, you have captured my metaphorical mood.. while we have legs let's dance.. Our words can twirl and laugh under the freedom of the night sky. Love this. Blessings S:) x

Lin Lane
Date: 10/10/2024 4:21:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Sam for feeling the mood I tried to portray. I'm grateful.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/9/2024 6:52:00 PM

I’d love to dance beneath the moon, where the fragrant wildflowers bloom. Lovely poetry… Beryl

Lin Lane
Date: 10/9/2024 6:57:00 PM

The image of doing that is such a lovely thought. Thank you, dear Beryl.

John Lawless

Date: 10/9/2024 5:47:00 PM

Lin, there are actually twenty-three million four hundred and 46 thousand three hundred and 12 stars...OK, OK, I had to go there but I did enjoy this dance beneath the stars...

Lin Lane
Date: 10/9/2024 6:15:00 PM

Two wonderful gentlemen have commented on dancing among the wildflowers. Thank you for dancing with me. ;-)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/9/2024 3:22:00 PM

Lin, so many different views of a beautiful day, evening, and night. You have created a celebration of nature....I can't think of much of anything better than sharing this the way you do. It's as if you are every reader's partner. A real pleasure...smiles and admiration from here!

Duke Beaufort
Date: 10/9/2024 5:06:00 PM

Lin, it was the subtle way you used "we." It's so inclusive and wonderful. I'm awed.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/9/2024 4:56:00 PM

Always shared with more emotions with someone loved. Your comment touched me very much. I've never had one quite so profound as to think I'm every reader's partner. You've humbled me and made ME smile. Thank you.