Lin Lane Poet Free verse

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~ Bite Size 92 Contest by Line Gauthier 10/9/24 ~

Where Wildflowers Bloom

Come with me where wildflowers bloom
Among weeds in the meadow we'll dance
Each day we'll meet and hold hands at dusk
delighting in the change of colors in the sky
When the moon glows with pearlescent light
we'll spend the night beneath a million stars

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thriveni c mysore October 11, 2024 at 11:11 PM romantic write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.

Daniel Henry Rodgers October 11, 2024 at 6:30 AM Dear Lin, Ahhh, you artistically encapsulated a romantic vision of love intertwined with nature. A wonderful celebration with such beauty of shared moments and the joy they bring. Good Luck on the Contest and I think you have a winner! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Lin Lane October 11, 2024 at 7:17 AM Hi Daniel. thank you as always for you continued comments in support of my poetry. Grateful to have you as a friend.

Jan Allison October 10, 2024 at 12:00 PM aww Lin this is so beautiful and romantic, could do with weeding out some artificial intelligence here, lol lol:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane October 10, 2024 at 12:29 PM Hold on there, Missy. Are you insinuating I used AI? hmmpphhh. Maybe you ARE a mean girl. ;-)

Jay Narain October 10, 2024 at 10:28 AM Wow, very romantic. Lin Lane October 10, 2024 at 10:35 AM Thanks

John Read October 10, 2024 at 9:37 AM Im on my way Lin. Xx Lin Lane October 10, 2024 at 10:10 AM Ha ha, John. No need to be in fear ~ I'm single. Thanks for commenting. John Read October 10, 2024 at 9:38 AM Tell your hubby I'm only joking.

Tom Cunningham October 10, 2024 at 3:49 AM You paint a delightful romantic scene with your words Lin. Tom Lin Lane October 10, 2024 at 9:19 AM blanc Tom Cunningham October 10, 2024 at 5:16 AM Red or white? Lin Lane October 10, 2024 at 4:23 AM aww thanks a lot, Tom. I visualized the scene, so I'm glad it came to life to you. Let's dance!

Sam Scott October 9, 2024 at 10:04 PM What beautiful imagery is this? Lin, you have captured my metaphorical mood.. while we have legs let's dance.. Our words can twirl and laugh under the freedom of the night sky. Love this. Blessings S:) x Lin Lane October 10, 2024 at 4:21 AM Thank you so very much, Sam for feeling the mood I tried to portray. I'm grateful.

Beryl Edmonds October 9, 2024 at 6:52 PM I’d love to dance beneath the moon, where the fragrant wildflowers bloom. Lovely poetry… Beryl Lin Lane October 9, 2024 at 6:57 PM The image of doing that is such a lovely thought. Thank you, dear Beryl.

John Lawless October 9, 2024 at 5:47 PM Lin, there are actually twenty-three million four hundred and 46 thousand three hundred and 12 stars...OK, OK, I had to go there but I did enjoy this dance beneath the stars... Lin Lane October 9, 2024 at 6:15 PM Two wonderful gentlemen have commented on dancing among the wildflowers. Thank you for dancing with me. ;-)

Duke Beaufort October 9, 2024 at 3:22 PM Lin, so many different views of a beautiful day, evening, and night. You have created a celebration of nature....I can't think of much of anything better than sharing this the way you do. It's as if you are every reader's partner. A real pleasure...smiles and admiration from here! Duke Beaufort October 9, 2024 at 5:06 PM Lin, it was the subtle way you used "we." It's so inclusive and wonderful. I'm awed. Lin Lane October 9, 2024 at 4:56 PM Always shared with more emotions with someone loved. Your comment touched me very much. I've never had one quite so profound as to think I'm every reader's partner. You've humbled me and made ME smile. Thank you.