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Where Was I

I was abandoned in a new place there were so many alien faces Thought it was my life's final phase There, the flowers bloomed in different hues Bright sun rays embraced the dew Everything and everyone was so true I discerned some true faces with no masks who spoke straight from their hearts who never interfered in other tasks I did glimpse my ancestors wander "Am I in Heaven? Am I dead?" I pondered "No,Not really",heard a mellow voice yonder "So, This must be a dream", I solaced "No,Not really", again a voice interrupted "This is a nightmare", I cried "It's not you here It's your alter ego that frequently visits us" the voice expounded. "But just tell me where am I?", I adjured! None replied and I came back But I still wonder, where was I!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/10/2019 7:17:00 PM
sounds like something mystical like reincarnation or I don't know what! I sure enjoyed letting my imagination run with this one.
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Date: 2/9/2019 2:47:00 PM
Perhaps you wandered into an ethereal realm where you needed a few moments of tranquility, Supraja! I bet you were sorry to be back:) Regards // paul
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Date: 2/9/2019 7:56:00 AM
You were on the spiritual realm from where our soul comes from dearest, Supraja! A mystic experience that not many are blessed to live! Inspiring!
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Date: 2/9/2019 7:16:00 AM
Mystical and intriguing is your poem..a great ending line, Supraja.
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