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Where There Is Love

Far away from her, far from comfort zone He goes there, where life beckons him Remaining true to purpose and meaning Atop the mountains or deep in the valleys Revering her love, as he journeys alone. Maneuvering around life's dead-ends In wayward motion of destiny's u-turns, Avenues she illuminates besting darkness-- Being his street-lamp, patently she burns. When forces somber aim to deter him Bravely she appears readying her valor Standing by him, in step with his shadow. He sees her all-over, where there is love. January 27, 2019 Placed first in ultimate January 2019 contest by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/3/2020 4:58:00 PM

Sounds like a deep love for her. Great poem, Vijay :)

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul

Date: 2/3/2019 8:56:00 AM

Quite lovely, lovely Vijay. Congratulations on your first place winning poem.

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/1/2019 3:50:00 AM

Some serious loving no doubt...great imagination...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/1/2019 5:25:00 PM

Thank you Arturo.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/31/2019 11:23:00 PM

Well penned, Vijay; congrat's on your win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/1/2019 5:24:00 PM

Thank you MLK.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/31/2019 2:30:00 PM

Hi Vijay, You have penned such a well written piece about love! Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/1/2019 5:24:00 PM

Thank you Alexis.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/30/2019 3:12:00 PM

vijay, i hope you are safe from the bitter cold and weather... huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/1/2019 5:24:00 PM

Thank you Nette.

Joseph May

Date: 1/30/2019 2:48:00 PM

Very nicely penned Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/1/2019 5:24:00 PM

Thank you Joseph.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/30/2019 1:37:00 PM

In her light, there will always be LOVE. I knew this was a winner, the moment these words touched my heart. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/30/2019 2:29:00 PM

Such a wonderful messenger of goodwill you are. Many thanks Brandy for your happy comments..I always enjoy reading your feedback.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/29/2019 2:55:00 PM

Vijay, I love the way you build anticipation as he goes to find her in a far-off place illuminated by her beauty!! You captivate the reader. Such a beautifully-penned expression of love's power. Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/30/2019 2:28:00 PM

Appreciate your kind feedback Carolyn..many thanks for your visit and comments.

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 1/28/2019 9:40:00 PM

True love never fades. Beautifully written and now this goes into my favorites list. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2019 7:28:00 AM

Many thanks for the FAVE Swetha..appreciate your visit and comments.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 1/28/2019 2:15:00 PM

A soul who spares no effort to be "away from comfort zone" is a soul that seeks a life full of purpose and meaning.. a soul open to change and growth.. a soul whose core is ignited "where there is love".. A gripping beauty unfolding the light, the depth and the power of Love.. My deepest wishes. Stay blessed always dear Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 2:38:00 PM

Power of love is the bond that holds them together. You said it well, Besma. Many thanks for the generous feedback.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/28/2019 10:57:00 AM

I love this heart mending poem Vijay, expressing a bit of sorrow between the lines of having to be parted yet always carrying her with him on his journey. Just beautifully moving Vijay. xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 2:37:00 PM

True--they are made for each other. Many thanks Connie for your kind feedback.

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/28/2019 9:05:00 AM

Vijay, your beautiful poem handily illustrates the wonder and omnipotence of love!! Well done !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 2:35:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and kind feedback, Mike.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/28/2019 7:49:00 AM

a striking piece of writing very beautifully painted vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 8:04:00 AM

Appreciate your visit Liam..many thanks for the kind feedback.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 1/28/2019 5:56:00 AM

This is so lovely. Such a powerful write. Thanks for sharing.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 8:03:00 AM

Happy to read you feedback..many thanks Supraja.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 1/27/2019 10:30:00 PM

Another very good write, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 8:03:00 AM

Thank you Lawrence..appreciate the kind remarks.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 1/27/2019 10:25:00 PM

brilliant write.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 8:02:00 AM

Thank for the visit and kind feedback, Pashang.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/27/2019 8:59:00 PM

This is a beautiful, powerful poem, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 8:02:00 AM

Much appreciate the kind feedback..many many thanks, Janice.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/27/2019 5:32:00 PM

"He sees her all-over, where there is love" Yes, because of her light. There are so many reasons why this touches my heart. Light and love- being the two that hold me so close. Closer than ever. Your thoughts always move me. Always!! I wish to save this, to read again and again. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 8:01:00 AM

You are so generous with your kind remarks. Thank you for taking the time to offer detailed comments. Your visit and feedback are much appreciated, Brandy.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/27/2019 4:54:00 PM

The light of his life, love this Vijay,

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 7:58:00 AM

Thank you Harry. Appreciate your visit and comments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2019 4:14:00 PM

How beautiful, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 7:57:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..appreciate, as always.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/27/2019 1:24:00 PM

Hi Vijay, Love is true, love is forever and love is being together - a union that must last into eternity - love your poem Vijay, you have a way with words which brings forth such poetic harmony. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/27/2019 2:55:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to write detailed comments ..you shine on poetry soup, Jennifer. Your visit and comments are much appreciated.