Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Where There Is Love

Far away from her, far from comfort zone
He goes there, where life beckons him
Remaining true to purpose and meaning
Atop the mountains or deep in the valleys
Revering her love, as he journeys alone.

Maneuvering around life's dead-ends
In wayward motion of destiny's u-turns,
Avenues she illuminates besting darkness--
Being his street-lamp, patently she burns.

When forces somber aim to deter him
Bravely she appears readying her valor
Standing by him, in step with his shadow.

He sees her all-over, where there is love.

January 27, 2019
Placed first in ultimate January 2019 contest by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree December 3, 2020 at 4:58 PM Sounds like a deep love for her. Great poem, Vijay :)

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul February 3, 2019 at 8:56 AM Quite lovely, lovely Vijay. Congratulations on your first place winning poem.

Arturo Michael February 1, 2019 at 3:50 AM Some serious loving no doubt...great imagination... Vijay Pandit February 1, 2019 at 5:25 PM Thank you Arturo.

M. L. Kiser January 31, 2019 at 11:23 PM Well penned, Vijay; congrat's on your win. Vijay Pandit February 1, 2019 at 5:24 PM Thank you MLK.

Alexis Y. January 31, 2019 at 2:30 PM Hi Vijay, You have penned such a well written piece about love! Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit February 1, 2019 at 5:24 PM Thank you Alexis.

Nette Onclaud January 30, 2019 at 3:12 PM vijay, i hope you are safe from the bitter cold and weather... huggs Vijay Pandit February 1, 2019 at 5:24 PM Thank you Nette.

Joseph May January 30, 2019 at 2:48 PM Very nicely penned Vijay.. Vijay Pandit February 1, 2019 at 5:24 PM Thank you Joseph.

Brandy Nicole January 30, 2019 at 1:37 PM In her light, there will always be LOVE. I knew this was a winner, the moment these words touched my heart. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy Vijay Pandit January 30, 2019 at 2:29 PM Such a wonderful messenger of goodwill you are. Many thanks Brandy for your happy comments..I always enjoy reading your feedback.

Carolyn Devonshire January 29, 2019 at 2:55 PM Vijay, I love the way you build anticipation as he goes to find her in a far-off place illuminated by her beauty!! You captivate the reader. Such a beautifully-penned expression of love's power. Hugs, Carolyn Vijay Pandit January 30, 2019 at 2:28 PM Appreciate your kind feedback Carolyn..many thanks for your visit and comments.

Swetha Vangaveti January 28, 2019 at 9:40 PM True love never fades. Beautifully written and now this goes into my favorites list. :) Vijay Pandit January 29, 2019 at 7:28 AM Many thanks for the FAVE Swetha..appreciate your visit and comments.

Besma Riabi Dziri January 28, 2019 at 2:15 PM A soul who spares no effort to be "away from comfort zone" is a soul that seeks a life full of purpose and meaning.. a soul open to change and growth.. a soul whose core is ignited "where there is love".. A gripping beauty unfolding the light, the depth and the power of Love.. My deepest wishes. Stay blessed always dear Vijay. Vijay Pandit January 28, 2019 at 2:38 PM Power of love is the bond that holds them together. You said it well, Besma. Many thanks for the generous feedback.

Connie Marcum Wong January 28, 2019 at 10:57 AM I love this heart mending poem Vijay, expressing a bit of sorrow between the lines of having to be parted yet always carrying her with him on his journey. Just beautifully moving Vijay. xxoo Vijay Pandit January 28, 2019 at 2:37 PM True--they are made for each other. Many thanks Connie for your kind feedback.

Mike Gentile January 28, 2019 at 9:05 AM Vijay, your beautiful poem handily illustrates the wonder and omnipotence of love!! Well done ! Vijay Pandit January 28, 2019 at 2:35 PM Thank you for your visit and kind feedback, Mike.

Liam Mcdaid January 28, 2019 at 7:49 AM a striking piece of writing very beautifully painted vijay Vijay Pandit January 28, 2019 at 8:04 AM Appreciate your visit Liam..many thanks for the kind feedback.

Supraja Kannan January 28, 2019 at 5:56 AM This is so lovely. Such a powerful write. Thanks for sharing. Vijay Pandit January 28, 2019 at 8:03 AM Happy to read you feedback..many thanks Supraja.

Lawrence Sharp January 27, 2019 at 10:30 PM Another very good write, Vijay. Vijay Pandit January 28, 2019 at 8:03 AM Thank you Lawrence..appreciate the kind remarks.

Pashang Salehi January 27, 2019 at 10:25 PM brilliant write. Vijay Pandit January 28, 2019 at 8:02 AM Thank for the visit and kind feedback, Pashang.

Janice Canerdy January 27, 2019 at 8:59 PM This is a beautiful, powerful poem, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit January 28, 2019 at 8:02 AM Much appreciate the kind feedback..many many thanks, Janice.

Brandy Nicole January 27, 2019 at 5:32 PM "He sees her all-over, where there is love" Yes, because of her light. There are so many reasons why this touches my heart. Light and love- being the two that hold me so close. Closer than ever. Your thoughts always move me. Always!! I wish to save this, to read again and again. ~ Brandy Vijay Pandit January 28, 2019 at 8:01 AM You are so generous with your kind remarks. Thank you for taking the time to offer detailed comments. Your visit and feedback are much appreciated, Brandy.

Harry Horsman January 27, 2019 at 4:54 PM The light of his life, love this Vijay, Vijay Pandit January 28, 2019 at 7:58 AM Thank you Harry. Appreciate your visit and comments.

Andrea Dietrich January 27, 2019 at 4:14 PM How beautiful, Vijay! Vijay Pandit January 28, 2019 at 7:57 AM Thank you Andrea..appreciate, as always.

Jennifer Proxenos January 27, 2019 at 1:24 PM Hi Vijay, Love is true, love is forever and love is being together - a union that must last into eternity - love your poem Vijay, you have a way with words which brings forth such poetic harmony. Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit January 27, 2019 at 2:55 PM Thank you for taking the time to write detailed comments ..you shine on poetry soup, Jennifer. Your visit and comments are much appreciated.

Tom Cunningham January 27, 2019 at 1:12 PM Even apart, where there is true love there is an unbreakable bond. Tom. Vijay Pandit January 27, 2019 at 2:53 PM True..this couple is unbreakable. Many thanks Tom.

Charlie Smith January 27, 2019 at 11:05 AM Wonderful write Vijay, where there is love indeed... Vijay Pandit January 27, 2019 at 2:51 PM Thank you Charlie..appreciate your visit and comments.

Demetrios Trifiatis January 27, 2019 at 10:15 AM Romantic whispers of love that soothes the heart. Excellent verses my friend, Vijay! Vijay Pandit January 27, 2019 at 2:51 PM Thank you my friend, Demetrios.

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