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Where the Wind Blows

~Afraid With No Light~

            When I was careless not to withdraw & decided to stay 
                    laying on my back with a low vision today
                    I got so lonely watching the stars fade away
                        & the rising moon took no time to stay
                          to shed a light upon my window bay.
                        Abruptly the wind blew my spirit away
                            during that lightless night of May.
                              
               Here Is Where The Wind Blew My Spirit & Soul Away. 
                                          
                     Thats when I screamed let me die or cry
                      let me sleep so deep not to feel I need 
                          to kneel like a slave to feel safe
                              for just a brink of a light
                             to not disappear out of sight.
                          Afraid I am with no light tonight
                       thats when my wisdom flew out of sight.                              
                       Abruptly the wind stole my soul away
                          during that lightless night of May
                       leaving my body lifeless with no delay.      
                                    Anyone, Help Me.

Therese Bacha
  17/5/2013  
Contest; Gail Boyle.......Where the wind blows

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Debbie Duncan Date: 6/10/2013 1:39:00 PM Awesome,,, you have a way with your words xxxx ;} Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 7/12/2013 9:24:00 PM Hi Debbie, sorry I was out for a while, thank yo so much for passing by, Its so nice of you. Terry xo

Donna Jones Date: 6/8/2013 10:12:00 AM Hello T..:-) I am finally back on line until the next storm decides to brew in Oklahoma! I wanted to congratulate the winners of this contest...have a great rest of the weekend Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/7/2013 9:53:00 AM Good morning Terry, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) this is a very pleasing poem... glad to see it on Gail's winning list.. xox~Linda Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/7/2013 9:57:00 AM Hello my dearest friend Linda. Thank you so much, as usual, I love when you pass by and leave your sharing feelings. Love Terry xoxo

Charmaine Chircop Date: 5/24/2013 3:38:00 PM I can hear a cry for help..So emotional it blown me away within your wind.Take care sweet lady.I will be back to read more of your enchantnents. Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/24/2013 4:23:00 PM Hello Charmaine, no I am fine, it was only one day. Hello to princess. Love Terry xoxo

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 5/21/2013 10:09:00 AM Wow very deep and very good Terry xx Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/21/2013 10:13:00 AM Hi Mandy, I am glad you are back. Thank you so much for your sharing. Love Terry xoxo

John Posey Date: 5/20/2013 2:35:00 PM Hi, sweetheart, this fine poem is reason enough that I did not enter... Sounds like a winner to me.... Love ya..... Jake Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/20/2013 2:53:00 PM Hi John, thank you for that huge compliment coming from you, I am honored. See u soon. Love Terry xoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/20/2013 5:43:00 AM - Terry my friend ..... so much deep feelings. - Touching reading - a very well written poem!! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/20/2013 8:34:00 AM Hi Anne, I hope you had a nice vacation. Thank for commenting so nicely on my poems, i feel good reading your sharing. Have a great holiday. Love Terry xoxo

Don Johnson Date: 5/20/2013 3:50:00 AM ole spirit returns , with a bit of a jerk, after your spirit returns to smirk, great verse here babe today.... Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/20/2013 8:32:00 AM Hi my handsome friend, thank you so much. Hope u are fine. Love T.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/19/2013 11:33:00 PM Gosh, I really like how you did your wind poem, with so much emotion, sweetie. The lines about the wind stealing your soul away were outstanding. I give a highest rating! Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/20/2013 8:31:00 AM Hi Andrea, Thank you so much, see u later. Love T.xoxo

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/18/2013 3:07:00 PM Very emotive and expressive work that you have penned for the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are uplifting..Sara Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/18/2013 3:19:00 PM As usual my friend Sara, thank you so much, I am starting to be convinced that i can write short poems. Take care Love Terry xoxoxo

Donna Jones Date: 5/18/2013 7:37:00 AM Oh T...sigh....helping all I can....when I'm in this place I hug my dog who licks my face and wakes me up! Joy always follows sorrow and is all the sweeter...you are loved..hugs... Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/18/2013 10:36:00 AM Hi Donna, I loved my new initials, T..... thats how maybe i will start signing. Always you my true friend passes by me, and rejoices my soul with a hug. Thank you Love T. xoxo

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/18/2013 4:33:00 AM My dearest, dearest Therese, the pain is intense, loneliness probably stronger but the light you are seeking there it is at the door, waiting to let it in into your beautiful soul! Your poem is fantastic and I give you High marks for that plus my love! Thank you! Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/18/2013 10:38:00 AM Yes my best friend Demetrious, you send me the light at my door, i will open and let in. Your sharing words wipe away my loneliness. Thank you so much. Love Terry xoxo

Manel Gunatillake Date: 5/17/2013 10:01:00 PM loneliness is well expressed. profound thinking beautifully versed. Congratulations Love manel Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/17/2013 10:12:00 PM So nice of you to drop by, i really do appreciate it a lot. Thank you so much. Love Terry xoxo

Russell Sivey Date: 5/17/2013 5:23:00 PM This is a very deep and intriguing write my friend! I love how you write your poems staggering like that across the page...then start it up again for the next stanza! You have masterminded a wondrous piece here Therese! What a glorious poem, Great Work!! Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/17/2013 5:47:00 PM Here comes my very best friend Russell, my dear, thank you so much for giving me always the courage to keep going. I am blessed to have you as my friend. Love Terry xoxo