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MEME BY MY DEAR FRIEND MEL

Where the wild waves crashed I saw you, standing upright Blond long manes, proud lion Arms stretched and face lit by sun I stopped, couldn't breathe Constricted, no voice, no sound Mesmerized, absorbing your strange beauty, unworldly attraction You turned with eyes closed Wind lifting that silky shirt You ran and jumped and I caught you and whirled you around What did I do to have you In my life, where did you come from, incoherent thinking while I kiss you, won't let go Not ever *** Meme by Mel Poem by Darren White January 25, 2017

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Date: 1/25/2017 11:29:00 PM
So romantic and you made it so real and wild and lovely <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/26/2017 8:50:00 AM
Was so vivid in my mind :)
Date: 1/25/2017 8:10:00 PM
You painted it in such a way that I could actually see it happening in my mind... perfect, my friend... <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/26/2017 8:46:00 AM
Heh yeah. Was a dream I once had :)
Date: 1/25/2017 4:47:00 PM
Beautiful love poem, Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 1/26/2017 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Agnes :)
Date: 1/25/2017 10:28:00 AM
Very sweet and tender. The pace made it read as a hushed breath...lovely
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Darren White
Date: 1/25/2017 11:50:00 AM
That was indeed the intention, Tim. Thank you :)

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